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Carlymillie

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Buy Me A Pen

    Carly here: ( A very short review from another African) First a big welcome to YWS! believe me, you'll feel at home, they made me feel same too. Anyways that's ...

    Sep 26, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Is There Hope After Failure?

    Carly here?: Last review for the day!. my hands are aching and I'm all sleepy because it's 00:18am over here. so I'll use this one to check out. Okay, so ...

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Haunted

    Carly here: "Pray for it, for it needs prayers the most".very creative line, and my favourite line of all. I was thought in dramatic literature not to condemn any work ...

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Literature, General Re: A writer's mind

    This is truly amazing I wouldn't lie. There's really nothing here to correct or criticize or whatsoever, oh! except the fact that it was essayish, article-ish , opinion-ish and wonderful-ish..lol..all

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Memories for Eternity (Edited)

    Carly here: Nice work! I love the song so much...the chorus most especially takes me back to somewhere I think existed only in mind...a little place I created in my ...

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: Inequality Has No Justice

    Carly here: This article was really truly amazing!. I liked the topic. "Inequality has no justice" and how despite this phrase, the article still has a glimmer of hope for ...

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: Smoking and its effect

    I think this article was captivating and actually passed the word you were trying to pass. Your research was o. average and I think your grammar, it was a little ...

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Supernatural Re: If Only

    Carly here: Analysis. Today I'm trying to analyse a few works, but I've just been sticking to poetry and short stories, because I haven't had time to read novels from ...

    Sep 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: The Gate.

    Carly's here: This isn't exactly a review to the poem but more of an analysis. The poem is quite vague, but I made out a thing or two from it, ...

    Sep 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Both

    Carly here; uhmm I didn't quite get the message here. The poem title has no association with the work, or I just cannot relate yet. I was going to mention ...

    Sep 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: do you remember?

    Carly's corner: (very short review): Haven't reviewed any work the whole day, i dropped by, your title caught my eyes, so I thought why not? but one thing, I'm extremely ...

    Sep 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: "Breathe"

    Love. favourite lines: You can feel the flurries in your gut. You can feel the panic in your heart. You can feel the sweat upon your hands And the pavement ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: S.J.H4: a Finale

    You know why I love this poem? first of all, I am a big fan of heartbreaks. Like for some weird reason, I enjoy a bitter end, and when one ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tree Poem

    Great poem there! Good morning from my side of the world. Your poem was beautiful and simple. I like it. The rhyme pattern was simple too. which made it so ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: The Watcher / Part One

    This is truly an amazing work!! I like the journal format.. its nice.. please tag me when you publish the part 2. this part gave me chills; ** Realizing how ...

    Sep 18, 2017


laughter is the best medicine, not apples.
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