Carly here: ( A very short review from another African)
First a big welcome to YWS! believe me, you'll feel at home, they made me feel same too. Anyways that's for that, I'm here for a short review after a long while of being here.
I like your poem very much. I have my a favourite lines too. (as always.) so here goes:
** I now know A is for Africa,
Africa for Angola, Algeria…
B- for Burundi, Botswana…
C- for Chad, Congo, Cameroon…
S- for South Sudan, South Africa, Somalia…
Z- for Zambia, Zimbabwe… **
This was great idea..it was incredibly wonderful and well written..
I have very few issues with this poem anyway. I think your rhyme scheme was forced. next time if you can't find a good rhyme to match the next, just let your words flow naturally and appropriately. poetry isn't all about rhyming..
hope this little helps...
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