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  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Free and Unafraid

    Omgg I love this, so beautiful. I can imagine a girl sitting in a room signing this while playing her guitar. I love the lyrics too, they tell a beautiful ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Could there be an us?

    Hey LEE! lol X) I love romance, so I automatically love you poem. I love the first line, it pulls me in immediately. "Been eyeing you off for a while." ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life after Death

    Hello :) welcome to yws. Im not really familiar with haiku, but im willing to review anything. I like this poem and the feeling it gives. You get warmer as ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: loving

    Hello :) Your poem is very very pretty, first off. I get this picture in my head that whoever you are talking about in the first stanza is very adorable. ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Friend

    Oh my goodness I love this poem!! It is so full of emotions that I want to punch someone for you. XD Ive found myself in situations like this so ...

    Nov 29, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Sarah

    Hey, Just want to say, I read and review at the same time, so i could get in as much as I can :) . "Its atmosphere- sharp but mellow, ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A prayer

    Ok, I feel kind of silly trying to review a poem with only three lines lol. But nonetheless, you put it up , so you must want a review. I ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Uneven Flow of Ink on a Cool Morning

    Wow, just wow. This poem is unlike any other I have ever read before. Its do weird, but in a good way. Its starts off so normal, but in reading ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Floating

    Hi, just wana say I read and review at the same time. Just by reading the first line i could tell that I would really like this piece. I love ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: quiet demolitionist

    I really like this poem. It is worded so beautifully and it very emotional. The pictures that you create for the readers are so unique and special, which makes this ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Wishing For You

    I looovvee this. It speaks to me so much. This is how i think when Im in situations like this. It is really sweet, and yet so sad and emotional. ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Shadow

    Hello :). I really like this, it has a very nice feeling to it. I like how your words are put together. They have this subtle emotion behind them. The ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: lover bo1

    Hello :). First of all, I kinda find this very hard to understand and grasp. Maybe im missing something? I do like the pictures that your words create, though confusing. ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: My Subconscious Journey

    Hello, just want to say I read and review at the same time. For the first line of the second paragraph, instead of peer into, you should say peer at, ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Look past Her

    Hello, I want to tell you now that I read and review at the same time. For your first stanza, im a little confused. You describe the narators life as ...

    Jun 20, 2013


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