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CamorynAnn

CamorynAnn

  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: My Sister's Skin is Darker Than Mine

    Hello, TheblackSheep! I really love this piece. It is something I have gone through in my own life and I could relate very easily. My favorite part was this section: ...

    Mar 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: piano

    Hello, Nightcrawler! I used to play piano all the time, but I have not had time in quite a while. This poem brought back many beautiful memories. I loved reading ...

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: The Boy Who hated Lefties

    Hello DrFeelGood, I'm Cam, it's review time! I've been gone awhile so be patient here. I absolutely loved this work. I made me smile and laugh as I read it. ...

    Feb 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: your blood is whiskey

    Dear SparkToFlame, Wow!!! This is so good! After a rather long leave of absence from YWS it was nice to come back and find something truly exceptional in the featured. ...

    Oct 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Papercuts

    Hello there, Monster, This was an amazing piece and I could relate to it very very easily. You perfectly captured some of the complicated feelings that I have almost every ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Waking Up (Sucks)

    Hello there, Gingahcakes, THIS WAS PERFECT! I read it while my ginger friend was writing a comic for class on a super hero named Nap Girl. We died laughing. It ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Call Me Sober

    Hello there, Tenyo, This piece was absolutely riveting. I liked how you were never fond of the car. calling it "some great beast" in the very first stanza. You foreshadowed ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: outlines of words better left unsaid

    Hello there, Iggy, This is my favorite poem that I have read in a long time. It is almost as if you took the thoughts straight out of my mind, ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the secret garden

    Hello there, Iggy! I really loved this piece!!!! It was so well thought out, and i loved the topics. I love the idea of the garden. The use of flowers ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: They tell me to be happy, and I am happy

    Hello there, Deanie, I enjoyed this piece, however, it was very long. In a few parts, I got a little bored with all of it. There was so much and ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Insomniac

    Hello there, danickname, This is actually one of my favorite topics to discuss. By farrr. I love wondering what would happen to us if not everything we believed was actually ...

    Apr 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mirror

    Hello there, BrittanyNicole. This work is very very good. I am extremely impressed. You captured quite well a good majority of the things that i think about and see when ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Technology Re: ma foraree

    hello there pengtingking, this is.. i'm not sure. It is extremely hard to read. You use acronyms, you barely make sense at all. I don't think that this is very ...

    Feb 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The inevitable

    hello there, rhiasofia WOW!!! This is breathtaking! You did a perfect job capturing something so difficult. That fear of the end. It is so beautiful. my favorite lines were "But ...

    Feb 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Nicola

    Hello there, Aquareed, Wow. This is fantastic. You have a very very wonderfully amazing gift for describing. Every line tells us more about your friend. I was able to come ...

    Feb 11, 2014


All my life I've wanted to be someone; I guess I should have been more specific.
— Jane Wagner