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protip, plot and characterization are always good thing. Smut fiction tends not to be.

....and writers everywhere will cringe no doubt.

Indeed, do add more

that's absolutely fascinating! Maybe you should have told the readers.

I.... ....ok then...

I recommend splitting this up into a post per chapter, nobody will review it otherwise. That, or wait for some madman to review it on the upcoming review day.

Jesus Cole, I was reading this again, it is truly a beautiful review. I thank you for the time and effort you put into this, I greatly appreciate it.

;)

Oh well, somebody else reviewed it. Now it seems like I'm not complimenting Audeh-kins

'HEH'

'different way'

is this little birdy lotus shaped?

Wow, this is an old review :)

christ this is an old review. My first I think. Cheers.