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Hey again sis! Before I start the review proper, there's one thing that's been bugging me slightly. (...)I value every comment and every critic. Critics are those who critique. What ...

Hey sis! Ita here to review. Now of course, like everything you write, this intrigues me. It's an interesting concept, however, I feel it's a tad vague. This is only ...

Hey there, MagnusBane! Ita here to drop the tiniest comment on this chapter. Alright, first off, this was quite good! The grammar and spelling was fine as far as I ...

Hey there, stffnt0! Well hey, this wasn't bad! I'm always one for a good ol' Game of Thrones-style medieval political intrigue. Have you read the books? You certainly seemed to ...

Hi starchild! I'll be dropping the tiniest comment on this. I rather liked this poem, actually. I'm not that good at understanding the meaning (I always keep looking for, like, ...

Well hi there, PurpleMoment! I confess I don't really review poetry, but this one caught my eye. My first inpression was one of… vagueness? I'm not sure what you were ...

Hey Sanskar! I'll be reviewing this chapter of yours. This was enjoyable enough, a more 'serious' or 'realistic' take on the war between humans and animals. I say realistic because ...

Alright, hey again Aria, Louis here to review your second chapter. Well, this'll be a fairly tiny review, because I can't seem to say a lot about it, apart from ...

Alright, hey Skyy, I'll be dropping the tiniest review on this. Overall, this was quite good, pretty intense in the last paragraph. I won't criticize the lack of description because ...

Alright, hey there Aria, Louis here to review. First off I would like to commend you -- this is remarkably well-written for somebody who isn't a native english speaker, and ...

Alright, final installment (for now, I hope) *rubs hands together* Again, this chapter lacked some degrees of description. Also, one thing that threw me off. Mara is (was, technically) male? ...

Hey again Sephiroth. Alright, well, this chapter. This chapter. This chapter introduces a lot of interesting elements, but doesn't quite explain them very well. You may want to work on ...

Alright, hey Sephiroth, let's get a-crackin on your first chapter. Again, I enjoyed this. There weren't many mistakes either, as far as I could see. However, the piece, more pressingly ...

Sephiroth! Finally something of yours to read. First off, this is quite an interesting concept. I'm definitely hooked. It was well-written too, I could spot no major mistakes. But, here ...

Alright, wooo, third chapter. My first impression was that of extreme confusion. There are apparently two Kevins in this group, one who is a know-it-all, the other one is dead. ...