Caerulean

Nice, I like it. :) It's short and sweet. :D That's what made it great. I actually have nothing much left to say. xD Okay, one nitpick lol: And bounces ...

Haha, nice! I love your poem. xD :D I love the 'happy' and carefree emotion it has. It might as well be a children's poem. :D I hope you win ...

Nice! That's a really nice poem! :D It looked like a chorus of a great song and I wanna put a melody to it! xD Like what the other reviewer ...

Hi. :) I actually didn't expect that I'll be making a review tonight lol. I've got nitpicks for you: She was afraid, if she was not careful, that her tears ...

Hi. :) Sorry but I don't have a 'real' review for you. Anyway, when I saw the title, I thought it was gonna be a humourous poem. But, when I ...

Hi there. :) This is my 3rd review (and, maybe, my last o.o) for today. I've got some nitpicks for you: I saw a curious thing to me, - Maybe, ...

It was epic! :D Both the humour and the technique are there! Since this is like a comical poem, I'm not gonna be critical with things and mention unnecessary comments ...

Hi! :D (EDIT: Woot! I just noticed, I made the first review! xD :D) Nitpicks: That Night. - Wasn't this supposed to be 'The Night'? By the way, why are ...

Hi, Sol! Yay! You've posted another poem! :D xD Nitpicks: Silly me, I'm back here, again - I don't think that there should be a comma after 'here'. If you ...

Whoah, that was REALLY REALLY long! O.o You owe me big time! And, by 'big time', I mean, more nitpicks! (Yah, I sadly took long reading this and had a ...

Hi! :) I didn't know you write poems too xD. Nitpicks: And i'm sure that, - 'i' in 'i'm' should be capitalized. The days of never ending hugs. - 'neverending' ...

Hello there. :) I just actually realized that your avatar is adorable lol. :D Nitpicks: I'm dying ~I need your help, Its oh so bad. - That one actually looked ...

Hi! Remember me? xD I actually got a little bit intimidated when I found out that you are the author. I was like 'o.o'. Nitpicks: In an empty barn on ...

Hey. :) Here I am as you requested. Now, on with the nitpicks: (xD) He jumped up and down with his fists up. - That actually didn't draw a picture ...

Haha! I actually didn't care if it flowed well or not, but, I just loved the ending! :D The part that ziggiefred quoted was also my favourite xD. :D And, ...