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Re: My Aborted Child
Hi there! :D First of all, congrats on the featured work! Realistic works like this deserve to get featured! :D Well, maybe, not all lol. Anyway... Nitpicks: I met Michal ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Moody Days That End in Y (Poetry Pair Contest)
Hello. :) (Uh...I don't know what else to say to begin this review. :lol:) Nitpicks: Today I need your company. - Comma after 'Today' A minute ago I wanted to ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: The Haikus of The Periodic Table of Elements
OMG! Haha! :D Well, I've got some nitpicks for you: 7. Nitrogen Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! BOOM! - ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Little Macey (1)
Hey. :D I'm so sorry that I'm only able to review this late. >.< :( I was supposed to read and review it the day I read the update in ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Perseverance Never Lies
Probably, it's just me but, the first time I read this, I was confused and didn't get to relate the poem with the title until the last time. o.o Stupid ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: I Can't Write
Nice! I like it. I like how realistic it is for writers or just people who are trying to write something, like homework or a school project or something. :) ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: I call
Ooh. This poem is interesting. :) Anyway, I've got only one nitpick for you: you - I think you should capitalize this...and also, to give more power to the word ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: A poem for Japan
This is SO much better than what I did. I'm so ashamed of what I (originally) wrote in my poem. T_T This deserves to get featured! It's very sympathetic. :) ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Counting the Stars
I love reading featured works...'CAUSE HEY HARDLY EVER DISAPPOINT ME! :D ^_^ Nitpicks: For when I need a wish, I’ll have my fallen star. - Ooh, I love it! :D ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: A Light Where There is Darkness
First of all: CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WORKS BEING FEATURED! :D You're making a feature spree! XD Anyway, nitpicks: all of it's secrets. as all gaze up at it's glory, it's ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: My Whispers On the Ocean
Awesome job, man! Keep it up! :D I love how simple the words and yet, they show how deep the emotion is in the poem. My only problem is that ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: My Heaven, My Sun
Hello. :) Nitpicks: Wandering through an empty land, there's nothing here, silence is so quiet it sounds loud. - o.o Please rewrite this sentence. My heart bounces out of control.Oh, ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: The Voice In My Head
Hi! is this the first time I reviewed a work of yours? XD :D I didn't know you are a poet, haha. Nitpicks: The demon wailed, “He has a plan! ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Morgan's Lullaby
Hello! ^_^ Nitpicks: There's more to tears than sadness, and there's more to life than death. - Cliché. But it doesn't matter 'cause it works here! :D So don't cry, ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Lies
Hello! ^_^ :D Nitpicks: Is there a blatant reason for your cruel, menacing lies? - Ooh, I love it! I love the emotion you put in these lines and how ...
Mar 8, 2011
