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it's a poem in which I'm remembering something in the past so not quite and capitalization is a stylistic choice but thanks for trying

Ahhhh thank you so much! And yeah it was on purpose, I started this right after reading The Metamorphosis, if that helps explain why :P Anyway thanks again! :)

I'll write something happy just for you

Not okay to do this.

heartfucker is my new favorite word and ty for the brilliant review

I really hope you didn't count this as a review

the title is about her fumbling with the keys because the porch light is out :P thanks for the review

you seem confused

wow

Actually, looking at it again "we" isn't the start of a new sentence so it works as is.

Aah! Totally spaced on the capitalization, thanks. I tend to accept comma splices in poetry but maybe I'll look at how to change the rhythm (in this case I was ...

the first line isn't the description, it's the first line of the poem :P

:')