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I kind of like.. really love this. And I'm not reading into it. It's a spoof thingy. I am fully aware. And it is an amazing one. :D

Beautiful imagery and a very sweet piece altogether.. I love the emotion in this.. I always love sweet poems like that addressed to people. Excellent piece. c: Coral

Nice piece.. it was a bit simplistic for me, but that's not always a bad thing. The emotions were very real, and I'm sure it would sound great set to ...

I think that perhaps you could work on the flow in the last stanza.. it threw me off, as it was a bit disrupted by too many syllables. Overall, this ...

These were beautiful pieces... I don't know exactly what to say or how to critique them, as of now I'm swept away by your beautiful words, gorgeous imagery, and vivid ...

Powerfully written.. altogether an interesting piece, especially towards the beginning. Nice write.

Interesting piece... the imagery was beautiful. I would consider giving some change in the structure of your phrasing to give more of a conclusion, but otherwise, I don't have much ...

I really like the imagery, the new color label for jealousy.. interesting piece. I think that perhaps you could go a bit further into it, using the colors as a ...

Concise, simple, with great humor in it. I absolutely loved it. c:

Incredibly interesting metaphors and imagery. I thought this was a great piece.. awesome word choice, fascinating thought process, nice rhythm and flow, smooth and fitting for the topic. Overall, wond

Crazy and absolutely wonderful. This was silly, and while it could use some work in technicalities, brilliant. Great job. c:

I kept on expecting her to be freed.. haha. Incredible imagery, well told story, and rhythm like a healthy heartbeat. Slow and steady, powerful and concise. Great job. c: Coral

I wasn't crazy about this poem, but the last two lines were beautiful. They were its redemption, at least for me. Overall, a decent poem with an excellently written ending.

I thought this was beautiful. In some places, it was a bit hard to follow, and I had to reread it, but the descriptions, the imagery was gorgeous and sparked ...

I think that this was a good piece- it was full to the brim with emotion. However, I think it could benefit from a wider word choice. It would make ...