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Personally, I understood all of this, which seems contrary to the person above me. I followed you throughout the entire thing- clear diction. I thought this was great... I agree ...

This was really good- I think that right after the beginning, perhaps you could work some more. The description stopped me from getting straight into the story. I do wish ...

I absolutely love your use of language- to be perfectly honest, I'm not sure I entirely followed the end, but the rest of the story was excellent. I love your ...

I really liked this piece... the imagery was fantastic, and was filled with emotion. I feel like something was lacking though: perhaps a reason for the defeat? I'm not quite ...

Hi there.. so, after the last line, I actually said, "That's adorable." No "Aww"ing or anything, because that's just too much, but it was super adorable. :) Nice job. So- ...

I think that this piece is very sweet- it carries a lot of emotion, a lot of hope, and even more nostalgia. I would think about perhaps adding in some ...

Hi there, While prologues set the scene for the book, and help create the world and situation, it is not a place for an information dump. This prologue was kind ...

Hi there.. so I would agree with your that this needs some work. Personally, in a lot of ways, this seemed more of a rant than a poem. There wasn't ...

Hi there... so personally, I think that with a topic like this, it could have turned out badly. I have heard the phrase "love like a flowing river" several times ...

Hi there, This poem was beautiful.. I loved the twist from the opening lines. I started reading it, the first line, and inwardly went "Really?" and then continued on, and ...

Haha, I really like this.. an anticlimax of sorts, and excellently penned one. I especially love the part about donuts. I am quite fond of donuts. Anywho. Great voice throughout ...

Hi there- This is a super sweet poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it- however, there were a couple of things that I think could have been changed. Especially towards the beginning, ...

Hi there, so, I think that this piece was good.. however, the topic was quite cliche. With those kinds of topics, you need to go about your writing in an ...

Hi there, so- This was a beautiful poem... the imagery is gorgeous. However, I couldn't find a meaning behind it. I don't know if it's just me or not. I'm ...

Hi there. and umm.. Wow. I did not expect that towards the beginning of the piece, haha. Nice job on keeping your readers on their toes. I really loved the ...