BurnblazeX

Heyy, Good day to ya! Heh, ouch. This hurts to read. I have personally been there, friend-zoned, as its called. It really does suck and I can feel the pain ...

Heyy, Good day to ya! Wowzers, I really like this one. I have always been fascinated with how different people perceive death, and this is really well done. "Addressed to ...

Heyy, Good day to ya! First impressions: Mmmmm, interesting interesting. I like this one. This is fascinating since I have not really seen many people talk about or try to ...

Heyy, Good day to ya. Hahah, I like this one. First impressions are quite positive. I am sucker for poems that rhyme. The inner kiddie loves it. The vibes I ...

Heyy, Good day to you Heh, this made me laugh. I have always been somewhat fascinated with clowns and why someone would willingly go to such length to ridicule themselves ...

Heyy, Good day to ya So starting of quick: "donne said no (wo)man is an island. oh, but how i have tried to prove him wrong, to break myself away." ...

Hi there! Its an interesting poem I will say, but there are somethings that could be improved upon. First off, the poem starts off pretty strong, the first few rhymes: ...

I quite like this! Its quite interesting to see other people also go through similar situations to mine. Some of the rhymes you used were nice: "me" "ugly" While not ...

Hello there, Its rare to see such a "short" story, if you can called it a story. But lets not get ahead of ourselves. "middle-aged couple" Hmm, i am not ...

Sven... Very original. Ok ok, lets start out nice shall we? Right. Hello there, Popped up on my front page. Alright lets start. “50 cents are more than you deserve, ...

Hey there! I am here for a review! First off. Excelent work. The poem has a rhythm, a tone and most importantly, for a dramatic poem, it has mood. And ...

Heyo there! Let's see what we have here. First off, the poem is really well written; very hard to find anything wrong with it. And usually with poems, I try ...

Heyo there! Let's see what I have in store for you now. "My heart won’t stop bleeding Impaled on its staff" The word 'its' has been used here meaning that ...