Buranko

Hehe I am glad I achieved the desired effect, now call 911 and have the DragonAde delivered right at your doorstep

Thank you for reviewing

Hmmmm, I agree that I should not direct it towards omly one gender. Thanks whatcha for your review.

OOOOO we are both tea freaks. I am in love with black tea and my mother often when giving me a gift, she buys me tea. That way she knows ...

Thanks for showing me those mistakes!

Read my haikus and u will see what I mean

Yea, I agree with you on colors, I struggle with using other words except these basic colors. My chromatic vocabulary is pretty limited. But as for the ending I believe ...

Aww thank you Momo

Ooo so it is a series. Then my bad, sorry

And what I meant with "darkness is bleeding/snors and growls" was that those sounds were the "blood". It is a metaphor for how the peace and silence is harmed by ...

I am used to capitalizing every line. I have been doing this since I was really young. It is really hard to change that now

Yea chronologically the monster takes the girl first, usually disguised as a cloud, then the hard journey comes. Your suggestion is good, i am too lazy to change xD

God damn dude don't apologise that much. Any opinion is accepted. Yep I did make it from the horse's perspective. Thanks for reviewing have a great weekend

I am trying to show that the night is talking, using the " to introduce the night's monologue. I am used to capitalizing every single line, and it is not ...

Awww thanks