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Re: the drawback of grief
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Oct 9, 2020
I messed up and that stuff with double review happened again, I have no idea how to delete this. So I wrote this comment -
Re: slash & burn
This is an interesting poem. Hey there, I am Buranko annd I will review your poem. The atmosphere you created is pretty mysterios and tragic, though at times it is ...
Oct 5, 2020 -
Re: Salvation Blue
Hey there Morrigan. I have never read any of your works, and I am glad I got to see what you write. Will surely check what else you wrote. Now ...
Oct 1, 2020 -
Re: a love letter to october
Hey Mage, good to see another of your works. This poem was a real delight to read and I hope I understood it. I am glad to see that you ...
Sep 30, 2020 -
Re: Mindfulness Poem
Buranko here, short review just for you. I love the metaphorical exprimation you used. The idea of emotions being an ocean is not new but I like how you adapted ...
Sep 27, 2020 -
Re: Tennessee Mountain Water
Hello there Vil. Glad to be back and participate in the worlds you create. Here we have quite an interesting one. Besides the words that have a little effect on ...
Sep 27, 2020 -
Re: Sepultus
Ahhh I love this poem. It has this calm flow, but the dynamism of the poem is found in the dramatic apocalyptic feel. I find this balance so satisfying. Hey ...
Sep 27, 2020 -
Re: Infinity of the Night
Good job, this is a great poem. Being a passionate lover of the night I found myself while reading this. I enjoyed reading this. The first stanza sets the mood. ...
Sep 25, 2020 -
Re: Baba
This poem is filled with pain but in such a poetical way I could not resist leaving a review here. So here are my honest opinions on your poem. The ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Human
Ayy there. Welcome to YWS, great to see a new poet here. I am Buranko, ready with a review for you. I am 100% you used Rag'n'Bone Man-----Human as a ...
Sep 21, 2020 -
Re: impossible
Hey there alli! Great song, really loved the chill vibe, but there are some flaws I found. Hope I will not offend you, remember this is my opinion on what ...
Sep 18, 2020 -
Re: Four Men Poem
Eyy there I am Buranko, welcome to the society and great poem. I love serios poetry but a playful one is really nice too. I agree with @LittleLee on most ...
Sep 16, 2020 -
Re: In the abode of God...
Heh this is a cool poem, that is really chill and has a drop of hope and cheerfullness in it. Hi I am Buranko, and I'd like to review this ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Belonging
Ahhh such cool concepts are used here. Hi I am Buranko and this is my review on your poem. Firstly, there is this feeling of confusion that follows me during ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Wasting Time
Ayyyy I wanted to review something for some points, and when I refreshed the green room BAM! saw your poem. Hi I'm Buranko, and I'd like to review your little ...
Sep 13, 2020
