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Re: The Ballet of Tears
Hi aooborromeo, I am Buranko, back on this website, currently in a review frenzy, here to give you feedback on your poem. Here we go. Your use of metaphors is ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: Walking To School in Chicago Should Be Safe: School on the Westside Shouldn’t Be Scary
Hi Imnebaur, I am Buranko, here to review your work. I have never reviewed an essay before so there may be some mistakes on my part. If you don't agree ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: Earth and Space
Hi there illy, I am Buranko, here to give you some feedback related to your poem. It starts in a strong way. "Curse the skies above". In greek mythology a ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: A Tanka I wrote for my girlfriend
Hehe this is such a sweet poem. Even if you wouldn't have mentioned the fact that it's for your girlfriend I would have still found the atmosphere of it very ...
Dec 2, 2020 -
Re: baked goods in the mirror
Hi whatcha, merry christmas in case I can't tell you when the time comes hehe. I am Buranko, here with the intention to review your work. It caught my eye ...
Dec 2, 2020 -
Re: numb (tw)
Hi nykolas, I am Buranko and I am here to give a honest opinion on your poem and what I managed to get from your message. What stands out in ...
Nov 23, 2020 -
Re: .
Hello there Stellar. Really glad to be reading a new poem again on this website and your poem popped right in front of me. After reading it I have been ...
Nov 14, 2020 -
Re: is this what nostalgia feels like?
Hello there person of the internet. Thank you for sharing some of your feelings in the online environment, I am here to give you a little feedback on it. If ...
Nov 5, 2020 -
Re: To Sojourn the earth once more...
Hello there Golden Wizard or Prakamya Shukla, however you want me to adress to you. This poem is sooo nice, I love it a lot so I will leave a ...
Oct 21, 2020 -
Re: Standing up
Hi rida, I am Buranko, ready to review your poem. I just came back to YWS and wanted some points, found this in Green Room, and enjoyed it so here ...
Oct 21, 2020 -
Re: Haiku
Hey there kitty (i took what I thought can be used as a name from your username). I can say that I have got a little experience when it comes ...
Oct 15, 2020 -
Re: poignant reminders
Hello there mckaylam. I stumbled on your poem when looking for some poetry to review. I gotta say, I loved it. The emotions are so strong, so vivid. Here, accept ...
Oct 13, 2020 -
Re: Moon Over a Sleeping Forest
Ello Raven sama, this lowly bard bows before your highness. I am here to review the work you created. I love descriptive poems. You took a really poetical theme, the ...
Oct 13, 2020 -
Re: Dear Emily (Emily Dickinson tribute)
Hello Arcticus. I want to begin by saying that you are my favorite poet on YWS and I love reading your poems and most importantly I like reviewing them. I ...
Oct 9, 2020 -
Re: the drawback of grief
Ello Mage, I am sorry for your loss, I have lost a grandpa and my great grandparents too but being younger I was clueless as to how to react so ...
Oct 9, 2020
