Bryn

I don't want to be too hard on this poem because you're obviously are going through a rough time, and I know how that feels so This is a common ...

I read over your poem and i just had to say the imagery of a young girls body being a beautiful hell is spot on. Ridiculously spot on. As far ...

Okay I'm a sucker for anything military, because I'm in a military family and it's going to be me someday to! Okay I really like it but I have two ...

So I ended up really likeing this poem, it was a little slow at the start but it grasped me towards the second stanza. Its a very good idea the ...

Interesting thing you have going here, I like it! It made me think a little bit and that first stanza REALLY got me. First off I have no complaints what ...

This is a really cute poem, your rhythm and flow is almost impeccable in this piece :) I liked it, it's definitely something anyone could read when they're having a ...

Sticks and stones may crack her bones, But words will always break her. Evil laughs and sneers and jeers: ‘Ugly,’, ‘Fat,’, ‘You loser,’ Okay the rhythm of this stanza is ...

Hey Hey..You HAD me at the first stanza, the use of that simile as all I needed! I agree with rain. Very good imagery and you flow is nice too. ...

Hiii :) I was reading your poem -obviously haha- and I like it is was sort of its own little gem.. the last few lines are what got me.. very ...

I really like this, because I'm planning on going into the military. So it definitely sparked my interest, and I totally enjoyed it. I think the dialogue between Claire and ...

Wow! *applauds* very very nice. I wish you could have seen the pictures in my head as this unfolded. They were completely epic! Well I really have no critques at ...

I think I will continue reading this as you go, because it is interesting. I'm in agreeance(if that is a word) with your other reviewers except Butterflies opinion on your ...

Well not knowing much about Arthur and all these things you're writing about. I can give a review primarily on content and just that! :) Being a reader with no ...

Heyy. So I wanted to do a little spying on you to see your poetry and stuff, I couldn't resist. So it happens I really enjoyed it, and I'm going ...

Overall this poem is very pretty. The words come off to me as a little blunt, but it might just be the translation. and your heart is no longer afraid, ...