BrittanyNicole

Omigod. I love, LOVE love this piece! You have a lot of talent! My favorite part has to be: "Blue artery connection I'm missing you Like a heroin injection" - ...

" how anyone could cut their beautiful wrists. " - I like how you made it seem beautiful. It's different, but cool. Most people who cut can read this and ...

" And some think she’s the same But in the end there is no point ‘cause she won’t play their game " - Nice, The whole thing about the game ...

Good story, poem. The cap is opened and water runs through the tap. The bottle gets filled. But there is an evasiveness that is played out. Mortal wishes are sometimes ...

am i imagining the way you breathe when you're asleep or do you really snore like that, cheek pressed to my chest hard, till i push you away? am i ...

Brovo! Brovo! Brovo! Nice, Nice, nice, nice. HIE: But it???s all an illusion, because they die too. Those people who roll up their spirits into tiny little balls so as ...

Nice. Reminds me of a movie, Romeo & Juliet. It's cute:) Good words and punctuation. Here lies testament of my feels for you, So long lives this, and this gives ...

Good poem. Amazing actually. You should give me some tips, cause the stuff I don't get how to put you do perfectly. not from the misery of domination but from ...

Touching, sad story. I felt like crying. Good story though. As, a child, I watched as my mother flowed with a quick, never-ending succession of men, flaunting each with a ...

Good chapter. Nice details and words. Good moods and Characteristics/characters. When Carrie awoke to the sound of a bickering people, she was very, very bewildered. She squinted at all the ...

Hey, It's Brittany. Superhero of reviews. ( silly me ) First, great details. Awesome pictures you present in your words! It's horrible and scary, but that's not all bad. I ...

Depressing, but it sounds like your speaking from maybe experience? "I had a bad dream." I told him. He scooted over to give me room to lay down. He patted ...

Good story. Nice details and vivid mind pictures. "Cool, so you want me to give you a lift? Like, it's quite far to walk and it saves your parents having ...

"Or that is what you tell me As you beat me long Into the dark, dark night, As my tears reach the earth And my screams the heavens" - Good ...

Nice, nice, NICE. c: I keep talking about word choice's and your's are good to. It was long, but it was enjoyable. stare at the pathway to your office like ...