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Re: Stabbing Mannequins Is So 2005
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... Well first off, this lyrical piece is really deep and I love all the words that you used to capture it. My parents left a note With ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: it is what it is and what it should be
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I really love this script, and I absolutely love the idea of a book that is just printed handwritten. I would read that kind of book any ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Final Destination: Chapter 2 Edited
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... So I'm not that smart.. so sorry for my dumbness... but is it the dog who is following him? or what... I'm sorry. The baby blue skies ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Final Destination: Chapter 1
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I really like this story and I can't wait to read more. I love how you keep this story in the third person. I love the suspense ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: The Gates
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... So I decided to read and review a piece that was like ten years ago, because you know I have no life haha. I really like short ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: I Don't Have "It" Anymore
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I simply love how you wrote on a poem about confusion of what to write. It is beyond brilliant! This line, Now I feel like a washed ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Americana Border
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I like this poem. It gets confusing a little bit, but it makes me think about the back story. I love how you could use so many ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Demons
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... This poem is really deep and I love how there is some mystery behind it. If this poem was a movie, I would seriously be on the ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: He is Love
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I really like this poem. It is short and simple, but it gets to the point. You show the readers of how the MC feels and the ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Kill Me Please
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I think this a very deep poem and it is beautiful. I love how you did the KILL ME PLEASE thing, I could never be that smart ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Our Identity
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I think this a outstanding piece. I love how you flowed so many emotions and still got this poem to sing beautifully. Now I only have a ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: You never knew..
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... First, I think this piece is beautiful. Second, I absolutely think this is brilliant with all the metaphors you have put in this poem. A single face ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: ​Pitter Patter
Hello! Absolutely brilliant! I love this and it is so deep and It reminds of me so much. The sound they make, reminds me of a clock ticking away the ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: The Sin of the Father
Hello! Well I do like this and I feel like you can add more and maybe make this into a short book or maybe even longer. I don't know. Haha. ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Can you feel the crimson blade?
Hello! I do like this and I never heard the real song so I am going to check that out when I am done with this review:) Can you see ...
May 3, 2014