BrilliantMustaches

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here... This is a really strong poem and it touches me. This topic is very personal to me and the way you wrote about this is very good. ...

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... I like when poems or any writings have weather and emotion that flow perfectly together, and you did that perfectly. Now a days "I ...

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... I like this poem. It makes me feel like a kid a little bit and it is bubbly. This poem is not a depressing ...

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here... So, I think your poem could use a little bit of work but it has great potential. It is well thought out and with a little bit ...

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here.. I think this piece is really beautiful and you did an amazing job of writing it. I lik how there was romance in it and it was ...

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here... I like this poem and just a few things that I think if you changed it will be even more beautiful. My body welcomes the claws that ...

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... I like your poem and it has amazing potential. I like how you bring out what the problem is when people are in pain. ...

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... This poem is very short and simple, but it has a big message. I do not see anything wrong with it.I applaud you for ...

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... WOW. I seriously think this so beautiful. I love how it was a perspective from a little kid. This sends such a big message ...

Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... I like this a lot, and seriously this is me right now. I have all the important scenes, I have the most important characters ...

Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I really like this poem. I am a follower of Christ and I think this is a an amazing piece. It is really deep and you explain ...

Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I really like this poem. It is short and simple and the emotions are flowed perfectly throughout the whole piece. This piece is brilliantly written and as ...

Hello! Emilykay10144 here... First, thanks for the review swap! Second, I'm sorry if my review sucks... Okay. I really like this, and I am so not into action, but this ...

Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I love this poem. It makes me feel like I'm a little kid again. My only thing I say you should take out are the stars. The ...

Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I am loving this story more and more with each chapter. You are an amazing writer and I hope you never stop writing. “Give us what we ...