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Re: Unborn Christina
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here... This is a really strong poem and it touches me. This topic is very personal to me and the way you wrote about this is very good. ...
May 15, 2014 -
Re: Frigid
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... I like when poems or any writings have weather and emotion that flow perfectly together, and you did that perfectly. Now a days "I ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Sweet-suagred centipedes (Double Dactyl)
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... I like this poem. It makes me feel like a kid a little bit and it is bubbly. This poem is not a depressing ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Words. Just Love Me
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here... So, I think your poem could use a little bit of work but it has great potential. It is well thought out and with a little bit ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: New Year's Eve.
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here.. I think this piece is really beautiful and you did an amazing job of writing it. I lik how there was romance in it and it was ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Falling
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here... I like this poem and just a few things that I think if you changed it will be even more beautiful. My body welcomes the claws that ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: The Sound Of Silence
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... I like your poem and it has amazing potential. I like how you bring out what the problem is when people are in pain. ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: The Ignorant
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... This poem is very short and simple, but it has a big message. I do not see anything wrong with it.I applaud you for ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: I wanted to be Cinderella.
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... WOW. I seriously think this so beautiful. I love how it was a perspective from a little kid. This sends such a big message ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: My Untold Story
Hello! BrilliantMustaches here for another review... I like this a lot, and seriously this is me right now. I have all the important scenes, I have the most important characters ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: The Dark Night
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I really like this poem. I am a follower of Christ and I think this is a an amazing piece. It is really deep and you explain ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Letters
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I really like this poem. It is short and simple and the emotions are flowed perfectly throughout the whole piece. This piece is brilliantly written and as ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. See other chapters as well)
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... First, thanks for the review swap! Second, I'm sorry if my review sucks... Okay. I really like this, and I am so not into action, but this ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: For Some Reason
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I love this poem. It makes me feel like I'm a little kid again. My only thing I say you should take out are the stars. The ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Final Destination: Chapter 3 Edited
Hello! Emilykay10144 here... I am loving this story more and more with each chapter. You are an amazing writer and I hope you never stop writing. “Give us what we ...
May 4, 2014