Booshian

Hello! Loved your poem and thought Id pop in for a little review :) Firstly, I really liked the way the poem (when flipped on it's side) resembles waves. I ...

Hello! thought I'd pop in for a little review :) I quite liked this poem, Like high school itself it was short and sweet. As the others said I agree ...

Hi Summer! I agree with the others on the length thing, Love is such a broad topic to speak on. So broad it can be difficult getting the words out. ...

OHMYGOODNESS. I loved this poem. Seriously, amazing. I find modern means of communication and what its like to grow up immersed in them is such an interesting topic of discussion ...

Wow. I loved this! There is such an amazing feeling of anticipation in this poem, you're waiting for something to happen everything is hanging on by the ''minuscule thread of ...

Hello just popped in for a little review if that's cool with you :) First off, as someone who suffers with anxiety quite severely it's always a hugely beneficial outlet ...

Wow. This was not the kind of thing I scribbled down when bored in class, my musings were never this profound I must say. I absolutely loved this! Usually I'm ...

Oooh I liked this a lot. A lot a lot. The first thing that jumps out obviously is your repetition of the title throughout. I love repetition because you never ...

Hidy ho neighbourino! Just popped in to sprinkle a little analytical fairy dust over this here poem. Sorry, I haven't been on here in a while so I appear to ...

Wow. This was right up my street! I think for up and coming writers in the now, Social media and the facade that comes along with it is such an ...

Loved it! Such a pretty, innocent definition poem. I was suspicious of the poems content when I read the title I must admit, I'm not sure the title really fits ...

I thought these were really great for a start. I only have a couple of suggestions,all minor. There isn't any punctuation in either poem making them read as one long ...

The title of this poem grabbed my attention straight away as my favourite song is "toothpaste kisses" by the Maccabees. So I assumed I would also enjoy this anecdote about ...

I really liked this. The repetition is very powerful, the period at the end of each "I hope she does" / "I hope you do" makes it strong and determined ...

I love the vagueness, I think that leaves it open to more personal interpretation. To me, I get the impression this was written in a time of great uncertainty and ...