Love is hate, at least to me.
A little late, so sorry.
Nothing can stop this feeling inside.
Accelerate and leave me behind.
So perfect and so out of reach.
Oblivious to all my speech.
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Hello! thought I'd pop in for a little review
I quite liked this poem, Like high school itself it was short and sweet. As the others said I agree it is a little short. I don't have much to reflect on in the review as it was quite short there wasnt really room for mistake. I did like what you wrote though, You're clearly quite good at forming a strong rhyming scheme.
Good job and keep writing!
~Booshian
Hello there! CelticThunder1438 here to review your work! a.k.a Selina
First of I would like to say, that I really liked this poem. It was quite good. I never really wrote poetry until the last couple months to a year but now I'm getting into it and am starting to enjoy it! It is always nice to read someone else's poetry also!
#1 I loved your rhyming it was really good.
#2 You described love so perfectly.
#3 I am defiantly looking forward to seeing more of your work!
Seeya later!
~ CelticThunder1438
The way you rhyme your words is fantastic! The construction of the poem is nice too, however it is a little short. You should definatly continue this poem! I didnt see any errors in grammar or spelling so over all great job! (Sorry tried to keep my review short.)
Hello there, Here to review your poem
Overall, I like it. I didn't notice any grammar/spelling errors, so great job! It was a little short, but you got your point across. "Love is hate, at least to me." as much as I agree, I feel like this line is a little cliche. The flow in the poem is a little rough to me. It doesn't seem to flow smoothly, and I think that has to do with your wording. Though this is just my opinion, other may feel differently.
Like I said, I like it. It's short, and simple, but you get your point across in the form of a rhyme.
Keep Writing,
~Nora