Boolovesyou

Beautiful beyond compare, A scarlet rose in bloom, Your eyes are bright, your face as fair, As stars about the moon. favorite part. You hold a secret power; Deep within ...

Four letters changed my life, just four, not one more. I love the internal rhyme, you should make more! You may wonder what they were, Love? I thought it was. ...

Being little was so fun, I used to play and run, And pick up lots of bugs, Then drag dirt over rugs. Maybe play peek-a-boo, And I couldn't tie my ...

Shaking, thoughts racing teeth clenched voices raising. (anger) First off the (anger) I don't think is needed. I understand why its there, and it doesn't really bother me as much ...

It's a concrete paved out world out there, Scrap metal danglen' though the air. When I look to the west I see a scrap yard, Torn out concrete all cracked ...

[/quote]Ok, not sure how I feel about this one, but I need feedback! It doesn't matter what you have to say-say it. Enjoy! A colony of ants march period or ...

She dances like an angel: A colon introduces a list of thing. ( I am sure you know that.) You can get rid of the colon and put a period. ...

Outcast Everytime I come here, Everytime I say something, I feel a silent snigger, Awkward line. You lot mimicking me. So what, I may be younger, So what, I may ...

I was going to click the 'submit' button on the tab. I couldn't find it. I realised it was hidden under a serious amount of 'unuse dust'. *coughs* Yes, it's ...

This was intense. I only have a few things I need to point out. My text will be in bold. If correcting grammar will be red, and if I see ...

[quote="seana"]Short story, enjoy! "Large latte, please." I said in a timmid voice to the guy stood serving coffe . He looked down at me and I saw a slight smile ...

The Earth is big. The Earth is stong. It's getting weaker, For it won't be long, The idea of saying "For" probably went with the rhythm, but it doesn't fit ...

I was inspired by the weather. I'm not much of a poet, but I get the occasional spurt of (probably misplaced) confidence to try my pen at one, so feel ...

The day you died; When you left me behind. Without a note... Not a kiss, No goodbye... Very nice beginning. When you committed suicide . This line was so blunt ...

The sun. Harsh and cruel it shone through my window, magnified. It awakened me to your betrayal. Yes a betrayal! You ate them up, one by one, little white pills ...