BookWolf

Aw, this was a sweet chapter. :D Well, besides the end, but, you know. I really loved it when Maggie was talking about her little brother. For some reason it ...

Wow. :D I was not expecting anything like this when I clicked on the title. Though I don't really read graphic novels, I think this story would work really well ...

AGH!! It took me so long to get around to this. :/ I'm sorry, I was really busy getting my school work back up to date. I had sort of ...

Yes, that was MUCH better! :D Your descriptions of the tunnel was fantastic. My favorite one was, "The ground was cool and slippery, and I couldn't stand up without bumping ...

Wait--WHAT IS? WHAT is happening? THAT DIDN'T TELL ME ANYTHING! Why, Snazzy? Why? ;_; Haha, anyway, I really enjoyed this. :D The story is really picking up already. So far ...

Wow! :D Even though I haven't read the other chapters, this was still amazing and very easy to follow. You're writing is beautiful and flows much better than most of ...

Haha, this was cute. :D Sorry if you meant for it to be dark and serious, but I found it to be light and fun, which, in this case, I ...

You dreamt this?!!! :O I would have been scared senseless.... Was it a nightmare or were you fascinated by it? I can only imagine how I would have felt. Anyway, ...

Hello, Mage! :D A really cool chapter you have here. I'm a gamer 100% and I was drawn in immediately. MMOs are my life, along with single player RPGs--and before ...

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. :D Just like the first chapter, this was incredible. Have you finished the entire book or are you just making it up as you go? If the ...

This is really good, Snazzy. :D After reading all the published chapters, I can safely say that you have talent as writer. You did a really awesome job of making ...

Oh . . . my . . . GODDDDDDD!!!!! Where has this been all my life?! Where have YOU, the brilliant one who wrote this, been all my life?! This ...

I liked this. :) What you have here is a very short story that ends with enough closure that you can stop here, but while also leaving an opening for ...

A pretty decent chapter you've got here. The beginning, I thought, was a little shaky, but it drew me in fairly quickly. Let's go over some sentences first, though. :) ...

Thanks a ton for that message, it really means a lot to know that someone thinks I'm a good writer. :D Might I ask which story it was that you ...