Boni_Bee

You're welcome :) Yay!!!!! This story might be continued *beams and waits hopefully* PM next time you post more, and I'll rush over here!!!!! I think you have a lot ...

Nice...nice...the only nit-pick is that the 4th stanza didn't rhyme... Anyway, good job

I'm not sure about the spelling of some of the words, as I think they might just be the American spelling way...? I wish the story was continued... :( anyway....*sigh* ...

Interesting!!! At first, I didn't like it, but it had a good, free, spirit about it....good job!

Thanks, Amice!!! :D

Yeah, that was nice! :D

Awesome! At first, I thought it was only about a dark, mysetrious character, but I like how at the end everything went better. Good job!

No worries, Torsa, I'm sorry if I misinterprited the theme, but I just found it very unclear, and I wouldn't be suprised if others did too. I only commented on ...

thanks, I feel very encouraged now :? :roll: ^_^

The old lady 'was coming up the lane when she heard him'......she was there... Well, thanks for your critique, but this was only a fill-in chapter, so I can move ...

I know I posted this a while ago, but I thought I'd revise it a bit and put it back up... ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Life is a wind-tossed wave that rushe

^Ditto! :D It was a very good poem...and I can't say much after what niteowl said, so good job!!!

^ditto to niteowl :D It is a good poem, and thats good if its published, but I only posted my opinion/advice, but that doesn't mean you have to take it....

P.S. Yeah, there was no emotion in it at all, actually...its like its from a third persons point of view, not yours.

Thanks, sliver*glitter!!! :D I'm glad you like it. Thanks for pointing those out, I'll fix them as soon as I can. With the g.irl thing, I have to put the ...