BondGirl007

Hey Leza! I just wanted to say great job. I myself am a story writer who trys at poetry, and I'll tell you, you're way better at it then I ...

Hey Rebel, first off- very interesting subject to write a poem on. I like the idea a lot. There is one thing I see, and that's that you repeat words ...

Well I found this poem really hard to read. It was all over the place, and either very elaborate metaphors or just very random...I couldn't really decipher what this is ...

I love absolutely sonnets, and I thought this one was pretty good :). You've got a way of rhyming, at time I felt the rhythm was a little off, but ...

You used a kind of odd mixture of old and modern English, which I found a little annoying, but at the same time I like to see that old English ...

Beautiful poem, you conveyed your emotions really well, and even got me tearing up (and that's a big deal.) I got a feel for who she was, and I could ...

Hey there Novus, I really liked the simplicity of this poem, good job. I have a few things I'd like to point out. Red chrysanthemums grown in a box on ...

I thought this was pretty good...a little hard to get through, but once I got the meaning, I like it. The last stanza I really could identify with because I ...

Okay, so some of your descriptions were kind of odd. Like "Fangs of his chocolate hair" I mean fangs? That doesn't really give me the image of hair. This whole ...

Hey Ink, I'd like to first start out by saying that I really liked this piece, you've got a great style that I envy. You've got an awesome flow, and ...

It's an alright poem, I know being a teenage girl, a lot of our thoughts are about guys, but I've read so many poems about teenage love, so that I'm ...

Oh wow...this has to be some of the best poetry I've read in a long time, and I've been reading a lot of poetry lately. You told a story, using ...

Haha, this is good...Very original subject. This is one of my favorite rhyming scheme, and I rarely read any poems using it.I'm not really one for long poems so this ...

It's short, and most of the rhymes feel a little forced. But it's not that fact I kind of like it :D. This line though, I absolutely love. You call ...

Hey Rachel, so...I didn't love the poem, but I didn't hate it either. Because it's so short, it doesn't really stand out to me, there's really no poetic examples, like ...