BondGirl007

Hey Jasmine! I can see since I've reviewed almost all your stories, that you've really grown a lot as a writer. You've gotten so much better at keeping me interested, ...

Hey there Moneybags! Well I agree with the last person on the London thug part...it's a little overdone, but otherwise I thought it was pretty good. One more thing though, ...

Hey EmiAnne! You need some more reviews on here, so Hope to the rescue! :D I think it sounds pretty good. I don't know what context it's in so it ...

Hey Jay! I think this sounds really cool, there will probably be some snags you'll probably have to iron out, but it sounds like a pretty cool plot to me. ...

Only one review? Tut tut, lets change that! Well the main thing about this poem is the fact that it's really kind of flat. Do you know what I mean? ...

Benny! :D Ah girl poems...corny and cheesy, yet very effective in wooing ;) so first off congrats on the girl, she's very lucky :D now on with the review! Now ...

Well to tell you the truth it was strange, and confusing. The clown or whatever it was, it's point of view was just odd...I assume you're going to explain more ...

Hi there! Bond here to review your lovely poem! :D First off that is an awesome assignment, and you did a great job with it. Seeing as you had a ...

Hey Val, I quite liked this poem, you've got a very cool style that I really love, but I've got a few suggestions on some stanzas and lines that I ...

Hey there Mae! Bond here to review! You've got a wonderful subject here, and a lot of good lines. The only thing is that the way you've repeated a lot ...

Heya Benny boy! I enjoyed this quite a lot, you made many points that I agree heartily with. The only thing is that you kind of get wrapped up in ...

Well this is extraordinarily short, and the language you've used in writing it is simple, bland, not at all what you want to read in a story most of the ...

Hey Kitty! I really like this poem, I think you did a great job on it. It's different, it's got nice imagery, and the rhyme doesn't feel forced like most ...

Hey Biffle, well I'll first point out the easy mistakes you can fix. New Zealand, apparently, has a strange ward chemicalin the waters surrounding it, "chemical in" His whanau were ...

Alright, so it wasn't as repetitive as I thought it would be, but I still think you should do this a different way. Ramar moved hastely to deflect it, just ...