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Re: No. 8
Soo...I'm not exactly sure if this is the full thing...orr if you're still editing and adding things on or not. I'm going to assume not, because it's been about an ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Don't Forget
Hey Nick! Hope here to review! Close your eyes and think of joy, Close your eyes and think of fun, Close your eyes and do not think of what has ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Music and Singers
Heya Nike, I saw your story only had one review on it so I figured I'd return your favor :D. My fingers tapped the strings of my new guitar and ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
Hey Jash! Ask and ye shall receive!Holy geez this is long though! It took a while for me to highlight the whole darn thing just so I could review it ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: A Mountain of Hunger
Hey Persy! Hope here again to review your looovely poetry! So I like some bits of this poem, and some I think are just too blunt. The problem with that ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Human behind the wall
Hullooo Mister Mustard Man, I'm Hope, and here to review! I've never really listened to The Wall, and don't really know the meaning behind it, but it's got some groovy ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Flash Fiction
Hey Lav! Hope here for a review! It's a super short piece, and pretty well written, but the biggest thing for me is that there's really no meat to it. ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: LoveBites Chapter 1
Laughter rang out into an echo, three girls sat in a moving car, celebrating one girls eighteenth birthday . T hey had drank heavily and were now driving, it was ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Pens and Knives [Preface, Prologue and Ch. 1]
Weeeee hi Pointe! I don't usually red the reviews before me, so sorry if some of this is repeated! “I regret it AmiLee, but I am only a human through ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Mistake (Part 1)
The originally bright blue walls, had faded down into a dull grey, just like Ryan's his mother's life. Love the meaning behind this, very good. She returned to the used ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Thief Chpt 2 Part 2 :D
I really wish you would have kept going with this story, I rather liked it. This chapter's pretty short so there's not much to comment on, but I did find ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Mary-Sue: A life
Ohh my god. I love you so so so much. This was a fantastic example of what NOT to do with your characters. I see so many MCs like this ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Ignore this completely. Don't let it exist in your mind. :p
SO MANY HACKIN REVIEWS. Even though we were identical twins, Selene still managed to end up prettier. Selene's Her straight strawberry-blonde hair was always shiny and neat, her ocean blue ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: *Untitled* Book about Pirates
Hey there! I'm Hope, here to review! “All hands on deck!” Father yelled, bounding up the ladder to the deck. The boat swayed dangerously back and forth. I tightened my ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Mr. Johns (Part One)
Okay I swear to god I already reviewed this, but apparently not. Oh well. The chair was cold and hard, lines of dried scarlet blood staining the metal legs Dried ...
Feb 3, 2011