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Re: Shadowed Mirror
Omg I am leaving from this site for a moment, coming back and seeing you all sad. What happened :( Do you need someone to talk to? You can always ...
Jul 23 -
Re: Sea of Conformity
Woah.. where do I even start.. I LOVE how the rhymes work. I dom't know why, it's just so addicting, I couldn't read it just once. They fall so smoothly ...
Jul 22 -
Re: how do you hold the weight of the world?
Hi and hello! Wow, this poem REALLY leaves the reader with something... The format is absolutely amazing. It's unique and therefore memorable! I love how the poem starts with "I ...
Feb 16 -
Re: the forbidden waltz
Hi and hello! I actually ADORE this poem. The words are literally dancing as I read so smoothly, I couldn't read it just once. This poem made gave me an ...
Feb 16 -
Re: The power of silence
I really like this poem. It sounds great! And so dark. "Silence…. It’s deep." It's true. Silence can tell a lot even if it doesn't speak. "Sometimes I wonder if ...
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Re: Glances and Gazes
I really like this poem. It's like talking with parts of yourself. It's deep. "To who I once was And to who I will be And especially to who I ...
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Re: Salt & Pepper
Hello! Bluuru here! The title stole my attention so I've decided to share my thoughts on your work. "I am Salt and you are Pepper what to do with birds ...
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Re: “When Yesterday Refuses to Leave”
Hello! Bluuru here! You caughed my attention so I decided to read it. And oh my God I don't regret it. It's so beautifully written. "A frame is a doorway, ...
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Re: fleeting summer daydream
Hello! Bluuru here! You caught my attention so I decided I NEED to review your work! That's a lot of poems so my mind will probably wander away so sorry ...
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Re: the boy in the corner
I love this poem! It's so deep and real. For many it's not fiction. It's a real life. That's what makes it special. "he sits on the last seat of ...
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Re: all i want to be is your mother
Hello! I really like this poem! It's lovely. At first sweet, then getting new meaning. "and i can't help it if all i want to be is your mother. i ...
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Re: the tulips are now red (part 2)
First part reviewed, time for part two! So what do I see here.. The same patterns, but with a twist! "i see red red stains my cheeks red rains on ...
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Re: the tulips are now red (part 1)
Woah! I never read anything like that! Firstly, the catchy title. When I opened your poem I was like "wait.. the tulips were red. Why is all yellow?". "yellow is ...
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Re: Journal entry - 8/31/25 "Sol"
This is so sweet! And full of life! I also love the sun but sometimes it gets too warm lol. Love the way you described leaves. It makes me imagine ...
Sep 3, 2025
