BlueGlow

This is as good as writing gets! First off, love the message you convey. Calling this a parable was an absolute power move of words. Seriously that was the perfect ...

This is incredible! Perhaps one of the best things I have read on this site! Such a shame it hasn't garnered more attention! I have to say that there really ...

This is a fairly neat work but there are some glaring issues that need addressing. Grammar. There are many instances of grammar breaking and it ruins the immersion of the ...

An intriguing alternate history of the Universe to be sure. Sort of Lovecraftian in nature, with it's cosmic gods and their influence over the universe. However there are a few ...

This was an interesting poem. I like the fact that you kept a consistent rhyming scheme but sometimes it feels just a bit forced. To be fair to you, rhyming ...

Now this, is a nice poem. Your visuals are great! This feels like it could be some sort of sea shanty if it were to be put to music and ...

This is an incredibly dark poem but I think you conveyed your point quite well. There are people out there who are unable to trust others and communicate their problems, ...

This is an excellent poem! I could see this in a book of folk poems. I love the tie in of the hammer and sycle as a way to symbolize ...

Good lord this story was incredibly well written and emotional. The ending was a shock and that was a fantastic way to leave an impression. Shock value. I think many ...

Now this is one heck of a poem! I love the message as I too agree that teachers, educators, professors, and other who have lots to teach, are underappreciated. I ...

This is a nice relaxing poem. I think you convey the emotion of summer quite well. Describing wind as a whimsical, playful character as if it were a person is ...

This is quite a comedic poem and I had a good laugh reading it. I like the metaphors and similes used throughout your piece. It really adds to it thinking ...

This is stellar work! Love the use of visual language to get the point across. You've also picked a theme that many readers can connect with; losing people, especially those ...

Holy heck this is probably the best work I've read on this site so far! I love your visual imagery, the way the whole thing flows, it's absolutely brilliant! I ...

I absolutely love this! Your imagery is superb! I especially love the way you express the ideas of extinction, pollution, warfare, and the existential threats that face humanity. I don't ...