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  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Lovely

    I spy someone stealing my disclaimer

    May 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Other, Dramatic Re: Another Smoke

    I'm glad that you found it useful! Let me know (through PM or something) if you post anything else. I'd be very glad to review it for you!

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: May Nightmare

    Hi Catlover211! I'm sorry to hear that you've had to experience this. Though it may not be my place, I'd like to say that I understand what you mean when ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The last celestrian: chapter one: part one

    I'm afraid I still have to say that it would make sense for the recording to be in the present tense because of the way video making and the such ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The last celestrian: chapter one: part one

    Ah. You have my apologies. I wasn't aware there was a prologue, I apologize for causing you any discomfort. My thoughts on the Kyro planet recording being in present tense ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: She Loved Him, And He Loved Her, But It Wasn't That Simple

    Thank you for your review!

    Feb 6, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: She Loved Him, And He Loved Her, But It Wasn't That Simple

    Thank you so much for such a helpful review! I'll definitely be making some changes soon as I have some more time! Again, thank you so much!

    Feb 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: One Cut, Two Cuts, Three Cuts, Four

    J promise I had not seen those before ._.

    Jan 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Empty Chair

    Awwwwwww, thanks!

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Truth About Self Harm

    Hello there Satira. I just wanted to explain the point was someone asking the MC about self harm, or something along those lines and the MC convinced them he/she didn't ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: A Cleaner Campaign

    Hi there Bridget! I'm not a mod but I've noticed in [all] your reviews, you reference your own works, which isn't ... traditional, I suppose and it annoys some members. ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Him

    Wow! I'm not a very experienced poetry writer, but I would say you have potential!

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Scenes from Downtown, 2015.

    Hello there! Biluata here for a review! I liked this poem, short and to the point, but with a nice ring to it, very well written indeed. The only complaints ...

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: For All The Miseducated Dandies

    WELCOME TO YWS

    Nov 19, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: How to Attract Readers

    Ha! Clever!

    Nov 12, 2015


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