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Re: Second Always Comes Last: Interrogration
Hello there, Luata here for a review! I had read these some days ago and meant to review but then I forgot, so lucky you . . .. or me, ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 9
Hello there! Luata here for a review, happy review day to you, may your day be merry and bright! I haven't read all of the chapters of this, I know, ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Four
Hello there! Luata here for a review, so happy Review Day! Going to try to pull my weight here so quality over quantity! Sorry, just quoting off of the wall ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Handprints
Hello there! Luata here for a review. Unlike xJupiter, I have never reviewed any of your work before, so I figure that I had better give you a fair warning, ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: The Rain
Hello BeanBird! Luata here for a review, specially for you on Review day! I'm not sure if this was intentional, but I saw no periods or commas, but since there ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Duels of a Blademaster
Hello there! Luata here for a review! Anyway the thing I want to say about this work, as a S & S fan myself (swords and sorcery) in case you ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Diablo
Wow, just wow. Okay, Luata here for a review and throughout this entire work, I spotted one grammar error and that is probably because I'm really bad at grammar and ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: Heartless Pleasure
Hello there, Luata here for a review. The only grammar issue I have with this work would be that you didn't use commas and periods and such when they should ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: ---
Hi there! This is Luata, and I normally do not read fanfiction, and for good reason. I'm not trying to be mean or anything whatsoever, but writing fanfiction puts you ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Unwanted Changes
Hey there! Luata here to do a review. Grammar and then emotion. Here we go. Sometimes i don't understand what people want from others they show there fake side at ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Love
Okay then, hello there! Luata here for a review of your work. Although I do not make a habit of doing grammar for review, but since this is your first ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Another silent death
Hey Falconer! Luata here for a review. Of course, if you have seen any of my reviews before, you know that i am trying to focus on the emotion of ...
Apr 19, 2015 -
Re: I Thought they Knew Me
Hello there, Luata here to write a review. This review will of course, be focusing on the emotional aspect of the piece. I'm not sure if I have reviewed any ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Accounts of Her Name are Lost in The Basement
Hello there! Luata here to write a review. I haven't been very active for a while so my review writing skills are a little rusty, but just to make sure ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Masquerade
Hey QueenAnne, Biluata here for a review. I haven't been very active for a little while so I'm a little rusty when it comes to reviews, so here we go. ...
Apr 17, 2015
