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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Second Always Comes Last: Interrogration

    Hello there, Luata here for a review! I had read these some days ago and meant to review but then I forgot, so lucky you . . .. or me, ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 9

    Hello there! Luata here for a review, happy review day to you, may your day be merry and bright! I haven't read all of the chapters of this, I know, ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Four

    Hello there! Luata here for a review, so happy Review Day! Going to try to pull my weight here so quality over quantity! Sorry, just quoting off of the wall ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Handprints

    Hello there! Luata here for a review. Unlike xJupiter, I have never reviewed any of your work before, so I figure that I had better give you a fair warning, ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Rain

    Hello BeanBird! Luata here for a review, specially for you on Review day! I'm not sure if this was intentional, but I saw no periods or commas, but since there ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Duels of a Blademaster

    Hello there! Luata here for a review! Anyway the thing I want to say about this work, as a S & S fan myself (swords and sorcery) in case you ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Diablo

    Wow, just wow. Okay, Luata here for a review and throughout this entire work, I spotted one grammar error and that is probably because I'm really bad at grammar and ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Heartless Pleasure

    Hello there, Luata here for a review. The only grammar issue I have with this work would be that you didn't use commas and periods and such when they should ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: ---

    Hi there! This is Luata, and I normally do not read fanfiction, and for good reason. I'm not trying to be mean or anything whatsoever, but writing fanfiction puts you ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Unwanted Changes

    Hey there! Luata here to do a review. Grammar and then emotion. Here we go. Sometimes i don't understand what people want from others they show there fake side at ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Love

    Okay then, hello there! Luata here for a review of your work. Although I do not make a habit of doing grammar for review, but since this is your first ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Another silent death

    Hey Falconer! Luata here for a review. Of course, if you have seen any of my reviews before, you know that i am trying to focus on the emotion of ...

    Apr 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I Thought they Knew Me

    Hello there, Luata here to write a review. This review will of course, be focusing on the emotional aspect of the piece. I'm not sure if I have reviewed any ...

    Apr 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Accounts of Her Name are Lost in The Basement

    Hello there! Luata here to write a review. I haven't been very active for a while so my review writing skills are a little rusty, but just to make sure ...

    Apr 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Masquerade

    Hey QueenAnne, Biluata here for a review. I haven't been very active for a little while so I'm a little rusty when it comes to reviews, so here we go. ...

    Apr 17, 2015


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