Sometimes I don't understand what people want from others they show there fake side at first and when others go easy on them and start to hang out with them they turn out to be equally opposite to what they've shown before! this surprises me a lot because we are living in a world where fakeness will be appreciated by everyone and the people who are honest and have tendency to stand for right and wrong will always be judged. We're living in a world full of hypocrites. This change in society where being fake is one of the new trend is simply pathetic and its awful when i can see people with out their facade. These people don't realize that because of them this world is changing in a negative way and its not good for our generation, they are unwanted changes. And I'm new here so I have no idea how this works so i just shared my first writing as a mere thought that was bugging me from so long!
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Hey there! Luata here to do a review. Grammar and then emotion. Here we go.
"I" should be capitalized, when before "they" and their instead of "there." I would replace "equally" with exact and a comma after "them""This" should be capitalized, no space between "fake" and "ness."
Take or leave the grammar advice, I understand that this is just you splashing your thoughts onto the screen. I know what you feel like here. I try to be real in real life, but sometimes it is hard to be real in a society when everything is so fake! I can see how this has been bugging you and your aggravation comes through and is portrayed in your writing. Very good!
Keep writing!
-Luata
Thank you so much for correcting my grammar, you're right I wasn't caring about it and was just writing down my thoughts.
I totally agree, fakeness leads to success in today's world. While the most honest people are kicked back down anytime they stand up for what is right. It's people like that who are the reason for world economy being reduced to a toilet.
Honestly the biggest cause is every celebrity on earth. 90% of trends come from a celebrity, and then get passed around by fans like a joint in a room full of stoners. For every honest person, their is a million posers.
Posers are probably one of the biggest annoyances to me. Nobody likes a wannabe... until the late 20th century when lying became normal and honest people are unlikely to ever be found.
It's disgusting when you truly look at society, it's more disgusting than a landfill.
I know right and its so common these days that you can't even oppose people on this topic and definitely i get you all big personalities are responsible for this. Sadly there are very few honest people in this world. Thank you.
Yup, and sadly people don't pay attention to the honest ones.