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BhavyaMehta123

  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: the notes of my times with covid-19

    Hi! This is so relatable. Everything you wrote in your article is taking place in my life too. The comparison of our present state with living on an island is ...

    Apr 17, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Butterfly

    Hi! This is a beautiful poem with a very deep message. Although, it is short, but at the same time, very impactful. My favorite lines from your work are: " ...

    Apr 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Vision

    Hi! This is a great poem. The rhyming, the vibe and the message all are very clear. My favorite lines from your work are the last lines. I can't stop ...

    Apr 14, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Other, General Re: I wish I hadn’t wished away my time

    Hi! This small piece of work is enough to bring hope and light in this tough time. First of all, thank you for sharing this.This makes me feel positive than ...

    Apr 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Tell Me How To Help You (Chapter 1 - Mori)

    Hi! I feel your story gave me all the answers as a reader. I hope this novel ends on a great note. The first chapter you have unveiled is heartbreaking ...

    Apr 10, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Sock That Picked Favorites

    Hi! I liked this. I feel this has been inspired from something which might have happened in real life. Siblings find it funny to do all such things and drive ...

    Apr 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Glass Half Full.

    Hi! I like this. This is so optimistic and I feel hopeful reading this. The lens we wear matters so much in life. I like your thoughts and ideas. The ...

    Apr 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Love That Lets Go

    Hi! I loved this piece. The rhyming, symbolization all is on point. "Letting go" is something all need to do and understand in life.The last two lines are the best. ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What Color Are the Stars?

    Hi! This is awesome. I feel your creativity is great.I feel this is logical as well. I feel this short, sweet and well written. I like that last line so ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Exposure: How I Deal with My Addiction

    Hi!Honestly, I have been reviewing articles, poems today and I did not see this coming.This was intense. I thought it was normal addiction for something or might be some drugs. ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Four poems about time

    Hi! I loved the concept of writing short poetry on different topics but regarding time. My most favorite out of the four is"Tomorrow". My favorite lines are : "Let us ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Gwaenchana?

    Hi! The title attracted me. I appreciate your creativity in choosing the title. This is so relatable as it happens with me. ' I'm okay' is the statement which keeps ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Magically Yours Part 2

    I loved how this story ended. Honestly, I was not expecting this."Let go" is what I learned from it. Every character added life to this story and made it a ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Magically Yours

    Hi bhaiya! This is just amazing. First of all, the setting, names all are very relatable. I can visually imagine every scene as the story moves on. I feel : ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Art » Literature, Lyrical Re: Scrambled Mind

    WOW Megha! . You have nailed this.I think this so relatable. There are days my soul needs love, care and support and sometimes I feel no one except time can ...

    Mar 27, 2020


“If you come at four in the afternoon, I'll begin to be happy by three.”
— Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince