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Re: I flow on as I sing this song
This was fantastic - very simply. Your use of words is beautiful, and I think you have a really nice flow to this poem. If I were to nitpick, it ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: An Epilogue
So, I haven't read the original work, but I can honestly say that I love this. The language you write with is really entrancing; it attracts in the reader really ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: Fish-hooks
Hello there, small review time (probably will not be small at all. I'm a rambler.) Okay, first off, I love the enjambment use - it gives off this great stuttering ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Sonnet
Well, hello there. Small review time for me, and I hope something here will be helpful. To start off with, I really like the imagery; I think you've done a ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Acrostic Poem #1
Okay, so this was depressing in a way I can't even fathom - I think that happens when you end a poem in 'what should I do but die?'. I ...
Dec 15, 2013 -
Re: Only one can soar
Okay, I really really like this; the message you send across, how it's written and the talent to make it make sense AND rhyme! That's a talent, I tell you. ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: The Bottle
Hello there, just a few words about this piece for you. First off, I'm still reading this over and over, trying to figure out what the bottle means - the ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: The day
Sooooo, wow? Like, mega ultra fantastical wow? This was absolutely stunning; the way you write and use the words is just... Okay wow. I really do love how this is ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: Am I Writer
Wow, this is pretty cool. I hadn't thought of trying palindromes before, and they're exceptionally difficult - so well done on that. I would love to see you do some ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: ..
Hello there, I'll start off by saying that I love this, this piece is a short one so its always going to be more difficult to find the core of ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: Down the Shower Drain
Uhm, so, wow? Like, properly wow? I wasn't sure what I was going to read, when I clicked on this, but I didn't honk it would be nearly as good ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: Certain
It's pretty difficult to review a poem that is grammatically correct with fantastic spelling, an amazing topic and written so brilliantly that I'm left sitting, staring at the screen with ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages
So, wow. Okay, wow. I really really really loved this. How you managed to capture what a character really is, is fantastic. It's so true, how you've explained it; what ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: Apples
Okay, I walked into this poem not thinking it would actually be something I'd like. But I really did. I loved how the whole thing - at least to me ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: Angel Wings
Okie dokie, hello there. I'll start off by saying this is fantastic. I couldn't really work out why it's called Angel Wings, apart from that first line which starts of ...
Dec 10, 2013
