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BethanyMarieWright

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    This was fantastic - very simply. Your use of words is beautiful, and I think you have a really nice flow to this poem. If I were to nitpick, it ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: An Epilogue

    So, I haven't read the original work, but I can honestly say that I love this. The language you write with is really entrancing; it attracts in the reader really ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Politics, General Re: Fish-hooks

    Hello there, small review time (probably will not be small at all. I'm a rambler.) Okay, first off, I love the enjambment use - it gives off this great stuttering ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet

    Well, hello there. Small review time for me, and I hope something here will be helpful. To start off with, I really like the imagery; I think you've done a ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Acrostic Poem #1

    Okay, so this was depressing in a way I can't even fathom - I think that happens when you end a poem in 'what should I do but die?'. I ...

    Dec 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Only one can soar

    Okay, I really really like this; the message you send across, how it's written and the talent to make it make sense AND rhyme! That's a talent, I tell you. ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Bottle

    Hello there, just a few words about this piece for you. First off, I'm still reading this over and over, trying to figure out what the bottle means - the ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The day

    Sooooo, wow? Like, mega ultra fantastical wow? This was absolutely stunning; the way you write and use the words is just... Okay wow. I really do love how this is ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Am I Writer

    Wow, this is pretty cool. I hadn't thought of trying palindromes before, and they're exceptionally difficult - so well done on that. I would love to see you do some ...

    Dec 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ..

    Hello there, I'll start off by saying that I love this, this piece is a short one so its always going to be more difficult to find the core of ...

    Dec 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Down the Shower Drain

    Uhm, so, wow? Like, properly wow? I wasn't sure what I was going to read, when I clicked on this, but I didn't honk it would be nearly as good ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Certain

    It's pretty difficult to review a poem that is grammatically correct with fantastic spelling, an amazing topic and written so brilliantly that I'm left sitting, staring at the screen with ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages

    So, wow. Okay, wow. I really really really loved this. How you managed to capture what a character really is, is fantastic. It's so true, how you've explained it; what ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Apples

    Okay, I walked into this poem not thinking it would actually be something I'd like. But I really did. I loved how the whole thing - at least to me ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Teen Fiction Re: Angel Wings

    Okie dokie, hello there. I'll start off by saying this is fantastic. I couldn't really work out why it's called Angel Wings, apart from that first line which starts of ...

    Dec 10, 2013


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