Bella

This poem was good -- I really liked it! For some reason the way it contradicted itself every few lines really appealed to me. Bravo! Merry Writing! ~Bella~

This doesn't seem very...poem-y to me. It just seems like a bunch of random sentences shoved together. No offense, but it's kind of annoying.... Happy Writing! ~Bella*Maria~ PS I love ...

No promises on not hitting you, Mad. (and since when did I care what Mr. Falke thought? He's not an English Professor! He teaches keyboarding!) Thanks for all the crits ...

Hehe, I found it amusing, as logn as I ignored the whole THIS IS FROM TWILIGHT thing...other than that, I loved it. I turned off my obsession...teehee. ~Bella~

Lindsay, I loved this! It was, in my opinion, something that anyone could relate to. You're poetry tends to be like this though, so I shouldn't expect anything else. *smile* ...

This seems very...cliched to me. Heartbreak, death and roses are overused in teh same category. It also doesn't flow so well. I have no suggestions on how to fix that ...

I like this. It's very loud, and out there, well still being enjoyable and making some sense. The ending was one that made me smile too, which is always nice. ...

I think the whole describing of an apple is utterly amazing, but I don't like the last stanza either; it doesn't seem to fit, or flow. MERRY WRITING ~Bells~

Linds, you never cease to amaze me. Your poetry has so much powerful emotion in it! I really liked this, although the whole mass suicide thing really made no sense ...

I liked the first one better, but this one was good too. I think it would make a bit more sense if you put both of them together, as i ...

I like it, although it's rather short. I'm going to go look at Part Two, but why couldn't it be added to this? (Yeah, I'm repeating Sassy) It does sound ...

Lindsay, I love you, and I love your poem! It was amazing; I can't tell you how many times I have felt like that, and I could really feel the ...

Thanks for all the critiques guys! You're so helpful!! I know my tense was off, Claud; somewhere, deep down in my self concious, I think I may have done that ...

I liked this a lot. It seemed like something I'd heard repeatedly, but you actually did it in a way that sparked my interest and made me want to read ...

I liked it. I know, that sounds like an absolutely horrid crit (the kind that would get kitties eaten...lol, sorry) But I honestly loved this. I wouldn't change the wording ...