Bella

Thank you guys all so much! I'm glad you liked it, and I really appreciate the reviews =) tigershark -- I think a lot of my spacing issues are in ...

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate your thoughts, though a lot of them are criticisms I've already given myself. A lot of your comments all come ...

**Also, I meant to note that I wasn't suggesting you fill your poem up with ___ these things. Underscores? Yeah, anyway, that was just because YWS wasn't letting me put ...

I agree and disagree with Miracles. An extra syllable would help that line, but "ever" would make it 9 syllables, and a syllable too long. I'd suggest making it something ...

I loved it. It made me cry. And if a poem makes me cry, that tends to mean the poet did a wonderful job of incorporating his/her emotion. Bravo dear! ...

I think these books were really great, but I lost interest as the story progressed. I felt like it was just dragging on, and stopped reading them. But I still ...

This was brillant Adam. So amazingly brillant. I wish I could give you more, but really I can't. Bravo, and Merry Writing! ~Bella~

What he means is he posted it for his friend, and posted it the exact same way his friend had originally written it. I do suggest that, as a friend, ...

Ask a moderator to move it for you. The moderators are the members with green names, incase you didn't know. All you should need to do is send them a ...

This is great, but it's really not in the right section. I suggest moving it to....I don't know where exactly, but this is the wrong forum. I think you'd need ...

Such a lovely poem Koko! *hugs* 'T is brilliant!

Awww, I love this. It was absolutely adorable! MERRY WRITING! ~Bella~

I really wish I could give some advice, but I've got none. I really loved these -- I just read all six of them in about ten minutes, because I ...

Thanks for all the suggestions! I've been working on this a lot lately, but I'm slightly afraid to post my new one now...Ah well, I'll just have to keep editing. ...

Hmm...I really liked this, and I don't know why. I wish I did, because then I could give suggestions, but I don't. Perhaps if I read it when i'm more ...