BeTheChange

The grammar and spelling need work. I'm not going into every little error, but you use "fin" once when you mean "find". Also, there are a lot of run-on sentences. ...

I'll be honest, I didn't have high expectations for isn't you, I'm just not at all into this sort of story. That's why I didn't really enjoy Ender's Game all ...

I like the theme of self-assurance and standing up for yourself, but there were just a couple errors: 1. "Mariana" trench should be "Marianas". 2. In the ninth line, I ...

I like this! Maybe I'm biased, since it reminds me of my own characters and their relationship...Even if it didn't make me think of that, I'd enjoy the poem. The ...

This was short, but had a good sentiment. I feel like the commas should have been colons or dashes instead. My other, larger complaint is the title. Something about it ...

I mean...I liked it, but there isn't much to say. This did fit the haiku form perfectly (yes, I counted the syllables, lol). So that's good? However, I disagree that ...

I liked the message of this piece, but it could have been executed better. 1. The rhyme seemed just a little forced. 2. My main problem is the bolded words. ...

This makes me want to read Mieville's books, for sure. But there were some grammar issues: 1. Is the book title Iron Council or Ircon Council? Which one is right, ...

I only have a vague idea of how the Phineas and Ferb theme song goes, and I haven't read the Heroes of Olympus series (though I know a lot about ...

If this is nonfiction, my heart goes out to you. If this is fiction, then it needs to be longer! If you fleshed it out, it could be a novella. ...

I'm so sorry you and your family had to go through this. Overall, this was a decent piece but I noticed a few writing/grammar problems: 1. You wrote "whales" when ...

This was a good, if depressing, piece. It wasn't confusing, but it still utilized figurative language, which is always good. I did notice that the second stanza is five lines ...

I don't think I've ever read a poem about gender identity. Kudos to you for tackling something like this! The way the word "it" was small and grey did annoy ...

Oh, boy... How do I say this? I didn't like your piece. It was hard to read, and the plot was a bit cliche and predictable. -You leave out articles ...

What can I say about this? lol. It's clever. It pokes fun at the speech patterns of modern teenagers without being mean-spirited; as a teenager myself, I found this surprisingly ...