BeTheChange

So...this is a really old work. But I stumbled across it and thought I’d review it for something to do, lol! First of all, some of your phrases are a ...

Overall, good work! :) As the two previous reviewers have already pointed out, there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Along with some awkward phrasing. However, the piece ...

Wow... I knew fake news was a big issue in the United States, but I had no idea it was this bad and widespread elsewhere. It honestly makes me so ...

Hey! BeTheChange here, aiming to help you make positive “changes” in your writing! (See what I did there? ....okay, that was lame.) This had an interesting set-up. Very old-fashioned-high-fantasy,

Where do I begin? 1. I am not a Muslim, but I should still be able to get your meaning through context. Unfortunately, that context is absent, making for a ...

...wow. I really like this. I can't say I understand your exact situation--I've never had depression. But I have severe anxiety, and on some level, I've felt this way too. ...

So, I'm going to come right out and say: I may not be able to do this poem justice with a review. It was really good, but I just got ...

I put it off for days, and I'm finally on the last chapter of Blotted Out before I move on to your next work, Fortissimo (hope I spelled that right). ...

The ship is slowly sailing! Eee! Anyway... *to self* You already complained enough about minor grammar issues...Snazzy doesn't need to hear about them again... Back to the review! I liked ...

Still some homophone errors, but nothing major that I haven't already pointed out. :) You had better not kill off, or come close to killing off, Johnny. Just kidding, it's ...

I'm starting not to like Martin..... "Immediately", "approximately", and "smooth" are misspelled. Also, you switch "of" for "have" again. Sorry if I'm being harsh about the grammar--I can be a ...

much for that potential ship...XD You use "though" when you mean "thought". "His ownself" would be easier to read as "himself". I liked how this ended, with the mild cliffhanger. ...

Nit picks: 1. "It must of been the kitchen."--you mean "have been". :) 2. "His voice sounded too sure and professional like." There are two moderate problems with this sentence. ...

All good things to report here! The grammar was better (except that ome spot where you use "defaults"?), the plot is getting really good, I felt a lot of emotions ...

Okay, so. For once, I'm going to start with the positives! I like all the detail you're putting in. As someone who struggles with that a lot, I always admire ...