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Re: august burnout/ blocked september
This is an amazing poem. First of all, your writing and use of imagery is so evocative. I love the way you use metaphors from math and physics . I ...
Sep 21, 2021 -
Re: I Lost You
I love this poem. I love the strong opening line “What happened to forever?” It perfectly sets up the mood of the rest of the poem: hurt, nostalgic, and a ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: [Those three in the backdrop of the cafe scene --]
As an avowed tea lover ( who often drinks twenty cups a day!) I absolutely loved this poem. I agree, tea with friends is something really special, a respite, a ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: it's not spring // why are you obsessed with new beginnings
This is an interesting poem. It’s very well written. From the beginning I like the way you take natural phenomena and give them a twist, a second meaning. “ I ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: Road Trip
I like this poem. It reminds very much of the light lyrics by Ogden Nash. It has the same elegance and light touch. I like the way you made it ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: liminal space
I really like this poem. First of all, the form is perfect for the content. I love the way you really highlighted this person’s feelings of being trapped, suffocated by ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: Identity
I love this poem. I really like the understatement of the first line: “I am but a collection of each little thing I’ve experienced”. The contrast is really interesting then ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: A genius's encyclopaedic answer sheet
Interesting poem. The first thing that caught my eye was the form you put it in. I thought yet answer and question form made it into an interesting dialogue. Now, ...
Aug 30, 2021 -
Re: [Imaginary data]
What a great satire of scientific and school jargon! I really liked the nonsense feel of this poem, it contrasted perfectly with the correctness and objective feel of the format. ...
Aug 27, 2021 -
Re: Miss You
I loved this poem the moment I read it. You have really captured so many emotions here. There is pain of rejection, nostalgia, even a little underlying reproach and bitterness( ...
Aug 26, 2021 -
Re: summer of storms
This is such a beautiful poem. The reader gets such a physical feeling reading this, it is an extremely atmospheric poem. Great poetry makes the ordinary extraordinary, but you have ...
Aug 24, 2021 -
Re: A Visitor From Far Away Lands
I think this is a really interesting poem. I really liked the ambiguity of the beginning - ambiguity is what masked poetry poetry after all - if we wanted everything ...
Aug 23, 2021 -
Re: Tiny bits of you
First of all I would like to say that I just loved this poem. I think the emotions expressed here are ones anyone who has ever cared for somebody can ...
Aug 21, 2021
