BailorAsh

This is a very touching poem... at the beginning, in the first paragraph, I wasn't sure how I felt about it. I was wondering "Where's the author going with this ...

A few things I'm going to point out about word choice: You used the word 'and' a lot. It was one of your main transition words, and though it was ...

Hello there! I would like to say that overall, I enjoyed this story. The first paragraph, in my opinion, was a bit slow. However, it helped set the scene for ...

Hi! I'd like to give a short review of your story. I enjoy how it starts out, with the action of the child being unclear. We don't know why the ...

This poem was interesting. The rhyme scheme is well-executed, and the ending brings a sort of closure to the poem that was nice to read. My critique would be to ...

This poem was brutal, but part of that is how real it is. I am a victim of bullying, and as are many of my friends. You captured it incredibly ...

This is beautiful. Absolutely stunning. The word choice was amazing and the imagery was just... beautiful. That's how I'm going to start this review. I love reading personifications of Death, ...

This piece is beautiful! I enjoyed all the musical metaphors used in it, and I could feel the rhythm in my head as I read it. I’m not sure about ...