Baidirai

Here to review. Wow... You said you had no idea what to write, yet this is excellent. Better than anything I could do. You convey your feelings of depression in ...

Here to review! ^-^ I can see you already have lots of reviews on this piece, so I'm probably restating a lot of things. But the grammar could be better. ...

Here to review! ^-^ This is simple, yet to the point. I admire when an author can do that. It means they have a great skill with wielding words. I ...

Here to review! ^-^ This actually made me laugh when I realized it was about CoD. It's good though. It conveys meaning, even though it's about a game. You trick ...

Here to review! ^-^ Oh my god... I'm in love with this.. The feelings it conveys are perfect. The feelings of people who are just friends, but love each other. ...

Here to review! I love the vocabulary and wording that you used. It really set the tone of the poem. I also really like the concept. I feel as if ...

Here to review! I am a lefty, so this kind of applies to me. I like it. :) However, the story seems to jump around a lot. The vocabulary was ...

Here to review! ^-^ Wow... Once again, I am taken away by how good of a writer you are. As said, the rhyming scheme is perfect. I don't even know ...

Here to review! ^-^ Wow... there is sooo much feeling in this... I have been in this dark time before. It gets better. But this person is past the point ...

Here to review! ^-^ Wow... I feel mediocre compared to you. Your poems actually flow... So much better than mine. You convey so much feeling in this... It saddens me ...

Here to review! ^-^ As said, I believe this should be rated 16. It would have grossed out some sensitive people. Also, the language was a bit iffy. The point ...

Here to review! ^-^ I always love seeing songs. I love to sing, so I kinda sang this one. I loved how it sounded! Music writers are some of my ...

I love this! This is amazing, and I'm not lying. The rhyming scheme is perfect, and so is the setup. I only found one grammatical error, and that was the ...

I can relate to this. This looks like a work originated in the soul. I love those kinds of works, because they contain meaning. I have depression, so most of ...

Wow... I really like this. It may just be me, but I really like rhyming poems. They just connect with me. But this one connects with me on a personal ...