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I like the topic. It seemed very professionally presented, too, with no real obvious typos or spelling/grammar don'ts. It seemed a little long, though. Not as in too long a ...

I like it. A lot. Though I don't think for a moment that I know what it's about. I love the line "I am pink as a frankfurt," and also ...

I like it ok, but it didn't hit me over the head, you know? Didn't strike me down. It needs more power behind it, needs to take the lead... right ...

I thought it was too weighed down with adjectives - the only uninhibited action was the dialogue. The other thing I didn't like was the use of too-strong words, particularly ...

I like it, and I could definitely imagine a voice reading it. Imagining a voice reading it led me to get a better sense of the words, the way they ...

I liked it up til the fourth to last line, One word. A single word that can cause So much pain… Asthma. That whole "one word"/"single word" thing is very ...

It wasn't bad, but I felt it could use more imagery. It got better as it went along, though... the first stanza was like all theory and abstract words strung ...

It's ok, but I want to hear about all the other stuff, the stuff in between. If you've led such an action-filled, fearful, emotional life so far, it must have ...

This is really good, one of the best things I've read on this site. I love the poingant sadness. It's so powerfully detailed, and the reality blends nicely with the ...

The scientific theme is nice, and I liked the way it connected everything. But the obscure words, combined the multisyllabic nuisance of words like 'vernacular' and the length of each ...

I didn't like this poem very much until the last line: I am more alive when by myself. I really like that last line, but other than that the poem ...

Hmm. Well, it was a suicide poem, so right from the start I was prejudiced against it (they're a dime a dozen these days, and few really grab me - ...

I liked it, and I agree with Amelia about the 'wanna' and 'no more'. The tired feeling comes through, and so does a childish rebelliousness that is echoed in the ...

I like it, and I can't wait to read more. I particularly liked the bit where Aramber is playing with his magic tricks, and the prejudice against the half-merman, perhaps ...

I like the first few stanzas, and the last one, but I have to agree with Chandni that the fourth stanza seemed out of place. It seemed very summery up ...