Young Writers Society

I like how you included the definition of "aphorism" in the beginning, I think it added a lot. I like how you mentioned that we need to help ourselves. I ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I think the idea of the "essence of life" is a very common theme in poetry, but I think you executed it in a very ...

This is honestly one of the most beautiful poems I have every read. Reading phrases like "moulding to the safe embrace and sweeping downturn of your smiling eyes" made me ...

This is an amazing poem, and giiirrrrl, you are better off without him. I really enjoyed the overall set up of the stanzas, and I think the structure really helped ...

I really enjoyed this to be honest, and I definitely relate to it on a personal level! Please, keep up the amazing work! Just a thought, maybe keep it as ...

First off let me just say how much I love the title of your short story! 'Opposites attract' is such a general phrase, and I find it interesting v that ...

This was an intriguing story to stumble upon. The title I like because it just explains what it is about. The story is about Eden. I love her name by ...

So I was intrigued to write a review because of the title (I haven't read the poem yet) but then I read the last line, so I'd try my very ...

Hi! Before I start I just want to say that I loved your description. It gave me a look at the story, as it's meant to do, and what it ...

Hi! I'm just going to start out by saying I really your title. But I have a question. Are you just meaning that it's frozen in the day, and that's ...

I've never reviewed a political piece on this website, although I thought yours looked really interesting. It is so true how the world could be at peace from past experiences, ...

Hi, I thought your poem looked interesting so I decided to leave a review for you. I hope it helps, but I'm sure you have no errors. First I'd just ...

Hey! So I read your description and I find it really interesting. So I am going to write you a review. First let me ask, is this your challenge or ...

Hi! I didn't see any mistakes, which is great, so I'm just gonna go ahead and talk about it: I really liked in the description you put that this is ...

Hey! This seemed like an interesting concept, and I am interested in what you're going to do with it. So I am going to give you review, I bet I'll ...