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    Re: An Aphorism

    I like how you included the definition of "aphorism" in the beginning, I think it added a lot. I like how you mentioned that we need to help ourselves. I ...

    Feb 11, 2020

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Essence of Life

    I really enjoyed this poem. I think the idea of the "essence of life" is a very common theme in poetry, but I think you executed it in a very ...

    Feb 10, 2020

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: not for a lack of words

    This is honestly one of the most beautiful poems I have every read. Reading phrases like "moulding to the safe embrace and sweeping downturn of your smiling eyes" made me ...

    Feb 10, 2020

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical
    Re: boy, i

    This is an amazing poem, and giiirrrrl, you are better off without him. I really enjoyed the overall set up of the stanzas, and I think the structure really helped ...

    Jan 14, 2020

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Rough, Uneven Edges

    I really enjoyed this to be honest, and I definitely relate to it on a personal level! Please, keep up the amazing work! Just a thought, maybe keep it as ...

    Jan 14, 2020

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Why Opposites Attract

    First off let me just say how much I love the title of your short story! 'Opposites attract' is such a general phrase, and I find it interesting v that ...

    Jun 19, 2016

  • Short Story » General, Other
    Re: About Eden

    This was an intriguing story to stumble upon. The title I like because it just explains what it is about. The story is about Eden. I love her name by ...

    Jun 19, 2016

  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture
    Re: Anonymous

    So I was intrigued to write a review because of the title (I haven't read the poem yet) but then I read the last line, so I'd try my very ...

    Mar 15, 2016

  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic
    Re: Ice Skating, Ice Breaking

    Hi! Before I start I just want to say that I loved your description. It gave me a look at the story, as it's meant to do, and what it ...

    Jan 6, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: Frozen Light

    Hi! I'm just going to start out by saying I really your title. But I have a question. Are you just meaning that it's frozen in the day, and that's ...

    Jan 6, 2016

  • Article / Essay » Culture, Politics
    Re: The Distant Dream

    I've never reviewed a political piece on this website, although I thought yours looked really interesting. It is so true how the world could be at peace from past experiences, ...

    Dec 15, 2015

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Life is a Dream, What of Reality?

    Hi, I thought your poem looked interesting so I decided to leave a review for you. I hope it helps, but I'm sure you have no errors. First I'd just ...

    Dec 15, 2015

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Continued

    Hey! So I read your description and I find it really interesting. So I am going to write you a review. First let me ask, is this your challenge or ...

    Oct 16, 2015

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Missing

    Hi! I didn't see any mistakes, which is great, so I'm just gonna go ahead and talk about it: I really liked in the description you put that this is ...

    Oct 15, 2015

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: First Love

    Hey! This seemed like an interesting concept, and I am interested in what you're going to do with it. So I am going to give you review, I bet I'll ...

    Oct 15, 2015

Love is all we have, the only way that each can help the other.
— Euripides