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Hey Kitty, I really liked this poem! I thought that you did a good job describing the Candle vs the Breeze and how they interact with each other and the ...

I'm not normally a fan of rhyming poetry but this you have kept my attention with. I definitely liked your ability to make it rhyme and make it flow without ...

Hey Classy, I want to start off by saying that I really loved this poem. A very good effort for a poem off the top of your head! :) One ...

Hey, I really like this poem!! I wrote a poem dedicated to music just the other night. Its fairly different though but i understand how music can make one feel. ...

Some writing ability you have there!! WOW!!! I am amazed how someone can write like this, tie everything together and finish with a huge bang!!! For example, i really like ...

Hey Kyousuke, Now I would like to start off in saying I like the first version of your poem better than the edited version. The reason being that I think ...

Hey, Let me just start off by saying that this was an absolutely beautiful piece! I can not even begin to imagine how the character feels after something like that ...

Hey geebee, Like the majority, repeating the word smile really got boring. Using another word would really improve this poem. Also, you used the phrase "i cant help but" 3 ...

I found myself reading this over and over again. This is one piece of exceptional writing for a first attempt. I dont normally comment but I really did like this. ...

This was pretty good. However, I dont like the spacing you have you have used, but it could just be my computer, i dont know. I think there are spaces ...

I think this is a really good song. It flows really well and i can feel the emotions oozing through every word. However I must be a little picky. the ...

About a year ago i would have related to this poem closely. I wrote something similar, but completely, pathetically longer. i shall post it soon. i would love for you ...

I like it. I could hear this song beating away in my head as i was listening to it. I could definately see myself listening and liking this song. Also, ...