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Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 7
Oh!! Viper dont be scared i will accompany you through the whole. I promise, Cross my heart and hope to die. And despite its a very proud moment for Viper ...
Aug 2, 2019 -
Re: Monsoon!!
Hallu!!Awru here to rescue your poem from the inclement green room. I will start by saying this poem was super and i really enjoyed reading it. Your descriptions were quite ...
Aug 1, 2019 -
Re: Least Romantic: Chapter Six: Unexpected Ally
Ala is a SEEKER!!!Her dreams turn to reality Oh gawd!!That grl's gonna do great things.I am sure of it!! Also i am concerned about myself now, a pre schooler loves ...
Jul 31, 2019 -
Re: Holes
Title:Holes My brain:Coming from moon that could be anything holes in heart,holes in soul,black holes and oh unexpected holes in*whispers*pants. Silvermoon:Its a completely "positive poem" i wrote Me:
Jul 30, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty One
Hullo!!Here to get one of my fav dragons out of the green room.Who knew the dudes who killed Nira a.k.a the Wisp Talons could be so friendly.Anyhow I am falling ...
Jul 30, 2019 -
Re: Book Stabber!!
Oh gawd!!That is soo ridiculously funny.I don't know i am laughing so hard right now.Why are you so Puree??My best friend is my bookshelf too.Ah!!the warmth and love of it.How ...
Jul 29, 2019 -
Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 6
Hallu!!Lets get it out of the green room shall we!! First off i am really glad u r trying to add funny sparks up the whole story really well. shoo ...
Jul 29, 2019 -
Re: Least Romantic: Chapter Five: Butt
Oh my gawddd!!that is so short.How am i supposed to review this*pouts*I think this story is just too pure for this world.The world simply does not deserve i a weirdo ...
Jul 29, 2019 -
Re: My Country, 'Tis Of Thee
Hullo!!Here to review this rhythmic piece.I really liked this poem.I haven't heard the song but this is very good.Even though America is not my country but i could clearly feel ...
Jul 28, 2019 -
Re: Oh child of love
Wow!That was so was sooo smooth and still.While reading this i thought time had stopped for a well.The words blended so well together.I don't care if all wasn't rhyming it ...
Jul 27, 2019 -
Re: Least Romantic: Chapter Four: An Overwhelming Mob (Of Preschoolers)
Finally the next chap. Oh!!thank god at least she got to the school. A few mistakes i noticed Ala jumped from the car, and ran to the entrance as fast ...
Jul 26, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty
OMG!!This chap was such an eye opener about the Wisp Talons. The poor guys have no choice its either others or their own kind. The death grippers seems like pretty ...
Jul 25, 2019 -
Re: For the Love of Mayo
I have to say this story was just side hurts from.all the laughing and yeah this is so old but i just had to review it.I love the way humour ...
Jul 24, 2019 -
Re: Heroes of Alteria: Chapter One (unedited, unrevised)
Ok so wow!!I absolutely adored this story.Since its unrevised so i am not gonna point out any the beginning the paw and name drop off was so cool and i ...
Jul 23, 2019 -
Re: Silence (Chapter one of Avemmirage)
Halluu!!I am here to rescue this amusing piece from the completely unamusing green room.First off your descriptions are absolutely awesome.The name Avemmirage is so dang catchy i.love it.The style u ...
Jul 23, 2019
