Its amazing how one's thought process differs from anothers. Interpretations. As such I would like to share some of my own impressions about the poem.
It is a nightmare. Silence. Being unable to call for help. Feeling so useless. Helplessness. It's dark and it's pulsing. It reminded me of days when I was coming in term with my growth. Its horrible. Especially the time when we start to comprehend how much things are out of our reach or our control. The great vastness. I don't know how the imagery of nightmare reminded me of something so clearly out of context...yet it felt same to me.
"Twisted and contorted in their now meaningless decisions"
There is this, the sentiment. So much helplessness. little by little the nightmare takes form. It becomes a situation. The desperation one feels when giving up a part of oneself.
"As their souls adjust to the world’s true form and light,
The echos of their screams drown in the dawn’s smile in the night."
The nightmare changes the one who wakes from it. As reality breaks into when someone starts to grow up. When reading the poem I felt such. Apart from vagueness of "their", the imagery, the atmosphere and words were pulled to great effect. It was a nice experience. Keep up the great work. And thank you for sharing with us all.
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