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Re: Child-Sized Hole In My Chest
Hey, I wanted to leave a quick review ^-^ (it's been a while, so sorry if I'm a little rusty) I really, really loved this poem, and a big part ...
Jul 2, 2024 -
Re: When The Curtains Close
This is a pretty short poem, so this review will probably be on the short side too. I genuinely love this poem, in part because of how beautifully its written, ...
Apr 9, 2022 -
Re: It's not me, It's You.
Hey, Avis here for a quick review (sorry this will probably be shorter than usual since I'm pretty tired lol)! I really like the theme of the poem as you ...
Mar 25, 2022 -
Re: take me with you
Hi, Avis here for a short review ^-^ I really enjoyed this poem, it was simple (I mean this is a good way btw), but very sweet. It really exuded ...
Feb 13, 2022 -
Re: The Burden Bearer
Hellooo! I really enjoyed this poem, so I figured I could give you a little review ^-^ So, like usual I'm going to give my interpretation (although this one is ...
Jan 15, 2022 -
Re: Tree of Life
Hey, I love this poem, so here's a review! I'm going to be honest, it was pretty abstract and I don't fully understand it, but it was just beautifully written ...
Jan 9, 2022 -
Re: Freedom
This was a super interesting poem to read, so first of all great job! My personal interpretation (this could be wrong) is that it's about suicide. Lines like "If you ...
Jan 7, 2022 -
Re: Growing pains
Hi! It's a little strange because the theme of this poem is closely related to a lot of stuff I've personally been struggling with, and honestly, this made me tear ...
Jan 3, 2022 -
Re: Pitter-Patter
Hi, so first, welcome to YWS! I hope you're having a fun time looking around and figuring out how everything works (feel free to ask me if you have any ...
Dec 10, 2021 -
Re: motion picture ghosts and other pleasantries
I have to say, I found this very unnerving, but I really, really liked it. Most of the poetry I see on here is more structured into different lines and ...
Nov 3, 2021 -
Re: And I'm okay
This is really beautiful. It's short and simple but you do an incredible job of conveying so much with so few words. Since this is a little vague, I can ...
Oct 31, 2021 -
Re: s c a r e d
Hi, Avis here to review ^-^ I really like your poem, especially how it expressed the way stress and fear act as a cycle, and I think you did a ...
Sep 12, 2021 -
Re: Tiny Epiphanies
Hi, I'm Avis, here to give a review! To start: I really, really loved this poem. There's something so comforting about the simplicity of all the little examples you cited ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: Identity
Hi, I really enjoyed this! The topic of the poem is really fascinating and really delves into the idea that we are formed by our experiences, and I love the ...
Aug 30, 2021 -
Re: I Miss My Dreams When I'm Awake But Not My Life When I'm Dreaming
I really, really love this. It feels like a story and the way it flows, describing dreams and reality to tell this story (or theory) feels incredible. I'm honestly struggling ...
Aug 29, 2021
