Authorian

Okay, I'm somewhat confused. Is he an angel? A demon? A sort of were-bird? Or perhaps I'm not supposed to know... It's well written, the description was well done, showing ...

This is a great short story, I love when the tell what could be a novel in a way that it couldn't have been longer, and you did that. I ...

Okay, I need to read the first part to fully understand, I'm sure. But this is greatly done all the same. The scene takes it time without being to long. ...

First of all, woah. Second of all, WOAH. This is simply beautiful, it really feels like the Nazis speaking. Not just one, but as a collective. It fits with many ...

Awwwww this is really sweet! I personally would love someone to do this for me, so the thought of raising a child like this is wonderful, and you wrote it ...

This poem flows well, and the concept is lovely. You have a great poetry voice! It's a little strange how the verses are different lengths, but okay for this piece. ...

First, PUNCTUATION There are far to many periods, add some commas and merge some sentences. Also, lenghthen this, when he tells the girl the story, tell the reader it too. ...

I really love this, like, a lot. It was beautifully written, the purple prose perfect for the style. I love the description of the old man, and the way you ...

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Wow, this is very well done. It speaks to me, as someone with depression and anxiety, and you did well illustrating how it creeps in and ruins your life. Now, ...

Okay first of all, this is beautiful. Second of all, you totally lost me. I read it twice, and still don't understand, it's to vague and complex, and I found ...

This feels very powerful, and you can feel the deadly aura from the narrator. I must admit, I feel intimidated by this character. Although, I must say, the entire story ...

Okay, this is kinda messed up, but it's supposed to be I think. You really need to clean up your punctuation though, I saw several mistakes, to many to point ...

Wow, this really hit home. This is a very touching piece of flashfiction. It tells a story in an instant, and is well written. You did very well on the ...

Hello! Authorian here for a review! First off, this kinda irked me, but you used a lot of strange comas vs periods at times. Consider going back through and analyzing ...