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BlueAfrica, :c Oh man. I hate reading sad stuff. No – I mean I love it, but –it’s like I’m heading down a path where I know what is at ...

Hey Future, Just passing by reading this and I saw that you have questions. Make sure to contact the author of the review and either post on their wall or ...

Yubbies21, This is an interesting form that your poem has taken - it's almost like it's drifting across the page/site. One thing that I would suggest would be to avoid ...

liveoutloud, xD That ending actually made me laugh - that was really funny! I think there's a charm to this, the tone evokes a bored but carefree attitude, which I'm ...

Dearws, This is a nice concept to a poem, however my immediate thought was that there really wasn't anything new that was brought in, since this idea has been done ...

lovethemusic, Lovely piece :) I think you captured this feeling/emotion really well throughout this piece and all in all, the images, the rhythm, the flow all was executed and nicely ...

Tenyo, Ooo, I like the chill of this. Your word-choice coupled with your images embody this sense of winter quite well! I particularly like that third and fourth stanza - ...

Jagged, Execution: superb! I thought this piece was really interesting in what it accomplishes, and I love where you managed to take me with the images and the words. My ...

SCAR! You shall see me review this for what it is, and then you shall see me review this for what (in my opinion) it can become (because I'm just ...

Lavvie, Okay. Let me just say: you were the one who pulled teeth one by one and let thirty-two fountains of blood make a waterfall. o_0 What grotesque imagery! I'm ...

Bradenpowell, Thanks for the review of my poem, that was kind of you! So here I am to return the favor. Overall, I think this is a great concept to ...

Unsocialbutterfly, I'm finding that I really love reading your stuff because there's so much authenticity to your voice. We're complete strangers to each other, yet there's something personal and reve

Nargles, I love this poem! ^^; I love the concept behind it- I think it's something that all of us here can relate with actually, and I find a surprising ...

Emilybrodo, Excellent prologue, it's a shame there's not a title to this yet :c I am actually intrigued, because I love these scifi-ish/horrorish/crazy experimentish stories. I can't wait to see ...

Pandorax, A wonderful subject matter for a poem! But I'm a bit disappointed :c This poem is filled with statements, but where are the scenes? I'd much rather be there ...